rate_review Reviews

I think it was well written and I liked it due to the interesting fact of the twists. It reminded me of a book I read called Bitten (I forget the author) where the main character is raped in the sense of non-consensual but also enjoyed it because she loved the person who did it to her. Rape is a complicated thing and those flaming should be more careful before they judge this lemon. I think you should continue the story so that Mitsu and her boyfriend/lover \'erase\' the bad memories as you had started to describe. All and all don\'t be discouraged.

I didn\'t write this for me. I wrote this for Mitsu. I HATE rape, myself. I took 3 showers after writing this for her. It made me think about the time I was raped. Please don\'t think that I find it attractive.

It\'s sad to think how many women are raped because men think that they enjoy it.

If your friend wanted to see their character having sex with Hige, it could have been done in a way that was more in character. Unless he had rabies or something. Then he might do that, in which case it would be more entertaining.

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Sorry for all that have hated this. I looked it up, and yes, men do have maidenheads. It\'s that head at the end of the cock, asshole. Anyway, Sorry about her enjoying the rape. This was really written for Mitsu, but I just felt like posting it here. Besides, who\'s to say Mitsu WOULDN\'T enjoy being...meh, I\'ll stop there. For her sake. Let\'s just say I tried to keep it realistic, all people considered.

To get on my soapbox...

There is no chance in hell that Mitsu would like being raped. Unless she is a nymphomaniac, (I doubt it) that would have given her enough emotional issues to want to die. There are better phrases for appnedages of the human (or wolf) body. There are also better words for bodily fluids. If she was tied to a tree the whole time, she would not be able to get on all fours, as it says. Undoubtedly, she would be more likely to bleed than to orgasm. She was content after being RAPED. To be honest: WTMF? As for Kiba, males don\'t go into heat. The incest thing was kind of creepy. As wolves go, it could might happen. Sorry to rant, I know it\'s your first lemon.

Keep tryin\'
-Stan

That was the fucking lamest thing I\'ve ever read.

- . She started slowly, licking his maidenhead, and swallowed it, licking his jizz-hole. -

wtf. Males don\'t have maidenheads, you fucking ass. lmao. that was SO fucking lame. Maidenhead... HAHAHAH!!! lmao.

Oh kiba doesnt have a sister in the show/manga, Mitsu was based off of a char made by me^^;
thank you all for reviewing Kuro really appreciates it^^

wow this is kinda strange... another thing i didnt know that kiba had a sister.. anyway keep goin, im strangely interested

damn, that really sucks for Mitsu.
but i liked it none the less.
thanks cant wait for the next chapter

oh wow interesting twist at the end,
cant wait for the next update