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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
coooollllll,mega cooooool
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's really cute!!!! i liked it alot!!!!!!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your ideas are good but you really need a beta reader. Your grammar really is terrible. It\'s disjointed and doesn\'t move along smoothly. There are a lot of mistakes that distract from the story. I hope you take this as constructive criticism and not a flame, but you really need to work on the grammar. Get a beta reader or proofread it thoroughly.
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to say that i love your story i thought that it was really good. i hope that you make a sequel to it.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic goodness!!!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story was good i liked it i hope you come out with a new chapter soon
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That had tons of lemon in it! Very intersting story.
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February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your Story was really good i hope you wrte a sequel to it. Keep it up you are a really good writer.
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God, this shit is fucking terrible! Take writing classes, for God\'s sakes or pay better attention in English class. I mean, damn!
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June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Guess who?? ME!! So you finally posted all of your chapters of \"Falling in Love With the Enemy\"! Keep up the good work! Aren\'t you gonna post the rest of your lemons from ff.net here, just in case?