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hey!
ur story is great!!!
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I got nothing else to say except...

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

i absolutely love your story!! whatever you do DO NOT STOP writing it. i have been looking for a really good wolfs rain fan fic and you filled my desire please update soon and e-mail me if you wish

All very good. I like the following: the way you described their interactions, the charcters you focused on, the way you made it feel real, the good desriptions. In the future i would like to see from you: more K+H H+Toboe pairings.
Keep it up, you\'re very good.

AAAAHHHHHH!!!! That is the best story in this whole Wolf\'s Rain net!!!! My life is now complete.... Could u make a sequel about when the den is finished and they get new members?

i really like the story it very good and the story also has a very good ending to it

Its been months! Please update! Update soon! PLEASE.... UPDATE!

~StarwolfRealms~

OMG!!!. You write so great!. I like all the history. The POV sometimes are very cutes, others times are kinda funny (like when toboe learned to kiss) and finally, the others make me horny XP. Keep going!!!

While I don\'t much care for the Kiba/Hige pairing (or any other MATE pairing of any pairs other than Tsume/Toboe) I actually can see this one playing out. You write it so well that its believeable. I myself see them as being close friends and can see them doing the occasional shag here and there to relieve stress/tension, with Hige going for Blue in the end. In fact, I can see all of the wolves mating with and amongst each other pollyamourously to relieve tension/stress. I must say this is one of the better Wolf\'s Rain fics to date. (Most are lacking in content, detail and being typed in a way that is an easy flowing read.) As for Mpregs, I\'m not a fan of those, but I think I could trust your skills in writing one of them-if you want to go that route-but I advise that Kiba and Tsume are not the ones getting pregnant. For me, Hige and Toboe seem to be the best fit for that role. And IF Kiba and Hige have pups, you HAVE to have Tsume and Toboe have pups too. If not, or maybe in spite of it all, I will write a fic down the line with them having pups. *Snatches a pair of Tsume and Toboe\'s pups and cuddles with them. Notices a white pup of Kiba\'s, snatches her up too.* MINES!!!! Muwahahahaha..... Sorry Kiba, Tsume and Toboe, but these three are MINE! *Runs away with their pups....*

Oh, and it would be nice, even if its only once, if Toboe/Hige mated and Toboe/Kiba too. Maybe Tsume could take Hige, for a thrill. Its up to you. :) =^..^= *Meow!*

~Starwolf, of the Otherworld Realms~

ooooooooooh cool you\'re going to do mpreg cause I love those kind of fanfics if not can you do a side one where one or more of them is thanks

I have to say, this is probably my favorite Wolf\'s Rain story to date and I\'ve read a lot of them. Despite some spelling errors here and there it\'s a smooth read and I\'m always sad when the chapter ends. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!