rate_review Reviews

love it......i still do think that iason is cruel though.....i like the way you write it

I like your Riki. I like the way he manages to hang onto who he is.

Until very recently, I\'d thought that Iason showed compassion to Riki. (Have no idea where I got that! Maybe just transferrance of feelings for Bagoas...

Bottom line - LOVE your portrayal of both of them.

I feel crowded reading it...try and break up your paraghaphs. and maybe lay back on so much explination of like saying how and when riki came to ison, most people already know. Or try and put it into a more flashback or after thought of a charry. It also felt a little rushed. But nontheless it was enjoyable to read

I think you have done a wonderful job witis pis piece. It\'s so short and yet speaks volumes. It\'s the mark of a good writer to be able to use few little words to depict the circumstances so well while conveying so many emotions at the same time. This point of view might not be as romantic as I would have liked, but it is probably more realistic in my opinion. I would love to see more of your writings.

I just want to tell you that i loved how you wrote this fic. It started out ok in the begginning, a little short but as the story progressed it got so much better and i thought it was well written, the way you described Rikis emotions and his thoughts and i especially like when Katze told him he was bieng selfish and should be thankful and Riki just tells him off and Katze is like \' he would chose poverty over this?\'. after reading it i was like, \" I Love this fic\". and usually i would read alot of fics and think they were ok, for me it\'s hard to find a good fic and i am happy to have read yours. You did a good job here and don\'t stop writing.

Interesting take but I guess the point of AnK is that it was difficult to tell who really loved Riki and who was just obsessed with him util til the end. In a way both Iason and Guy loved Riki to death and at least to the point of obsession if not beyond it. It is my opinion that between Guy and Iason, it is Iason that is the most magnanimous, he saved Guy because Riki asked it of him and in the end with his legs cut off he was genuine about wanting Riki to take Guy and leave and be as happy as he can be. Thus with this prejudice it hard to swallow your take on Iason but that’s just me.

A little lacking in down to earth details, but maaaaan! Good stuff! It\'s refreshing to see someone write with the idea that Riki is not in love with the really towering vicious platnium Blondie. I sense a one-shot however *pss - prove me wrong*