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oh my gosh.. that was SOOOO cool :D *glomps you and gives lollipop* yayness =P

That was a really great story, however, could you make your next one slightly less haulting. It seems like your haveing trouble decideing want you want down. Aside from that is was great. I hope you write another story agan, you've got a great imagionation!

I dont' really understand why you strayed from the quotations marks, but what ever. nice story.

okay, i good, but needs some work, esspecially on the the \"lemon\" part. it took a little long to get to the actual well...\'you know\' (^.~)
ANYWAY!!! i completly understand the fact that they\'re both virgins, but when you\'re horny, you can\'t last that long to have a conversation about wheather you should fuck or not. i mean, just think about it. and what do you not know the \"facts\" about anal sex? when Gary asked, \"how are you gonna get off\" i so taken aback. Hello?!!? its called a prostate!! just brush against it a few times (with your cock) while stroking your \"partner\". and there you go. Orgasm! (wow, i\'m really sorry if i was or sounded mean, i was just giving suggestions^^ Forgive meh)

Great fic! You should definitly write more.

Soooo!!!! good!!!!!! I really love it. it was marvelous!! romantic, and exciting. you have to writte another one soon.

see you