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This is a terrific story, very well written. I'm impressed and anxious to read more, keep up the good work.

I like it. Your writing is great. Please continue

Wow that second chap was even betthanthan the first! Please update asap!

Great fic ^_^ I hope to see some "action" soon though. How I luvs smutiness. Go boisex!

Good story so far... cept one thing... Toboe wouldn't have given up so easy with Tsume... Update soon okay?
^.^ JOSHIE ^.^

Hello. I just finished reading your story, and let me just say that I LOVED IT. I mean, you got such good characterization of Tsume and the rest (but am actually rather more thrilled with Tsume...¬_¬ He IS my favourite character after all), and I´ve seen so very very few stories that are at least a little faithful to their personalities, like yours has achieved...that it makes me feel so sad. Well, anyway, I just wanted to say that I admire this work of yours very much indeed and that I´m eagerly expecting for you to continue it, yes? See you, then.

wow thats way amazing especialy how you manage to keep everone in charecter. pleas update soon i want to know what happen to toboe

Hello. I´ve just finished reading your story and let me just say that I LOVED IT. Your characterization of all and each of the...well, characters is so very good. I´ve seen very few works that remain faithful to the characters personalities, but you have achieved it greatly. I´m thrilled! Your my new idol! Well, plese continue with it, I´ll be eargerly waiting for the next chapter to com out!

Another awsome chapter. Keep it up!! ASAP!!

Great start. Your writing style is clear and straightforward, and you\'ve done a very good job of keeping Tsume and Toboe in character so far. I\'m interested to see what happens next.