rate_review Reviews

i love your story. you nailed the characters personalities perfectly. please continue!!

*applauds*Excellent work.There were these snippets of funny things in there which made it more enjoyable to read.I like how you made Toboe so persistent to get closer to Tsume,lin thn the show except it was in a more Tsu/To way.You made Tsume try hard to keep To\' away from him,which I think is great that it\'ll start out like that but eventually turn into something more.I like how you wrote about what was in Tsume\'s head and how well it was all written.You wrote like you were Tsume,and I think when an author does that in their story,and how well you pulled it off,is great.

I really enjoyed reading this, all the chars are so...well themselves ^_^ Your a great writer, I reviewed so how about that second chapter? *hint* *hint*

Good job. lik like the way you handled Tsume, most people who wriend end to make him a sap ///_^;