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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(laughs) I thought there would be more oh well you are the Author and I like it I really do not like threesome though I gave it a shot it was very good actually the best sometimes doing t threesome story is hard to explain to of what is going on though this make sense to me more than the others I had red keep it up and I hope there would be more!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The ending was great lol
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The plot/stroyline was good, it was just a little dry. In the next one you might try to make it a little more clear who is doing what, but ause mor pronouns. Still I think it was a good story.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! discard the fat one! meep, sorry hige, but you got left out of that one, perhaps next time, ne?
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but there were a few mistakes. I think you should get a beta.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read this a while ago.... and stupid me I forgot to review it.... Bad LK! Anyway.....
I'm not sure whether I should blush or drool uncontrolably.... Maybe both?
But yeah, it was good. Very tasty. ^_^ And poor Hige has no idea what's going on. *snicker*
I'm not sure whether I should blush or drool uncontrolably.... Maybe both?
But yeah, it was good. Very tasty. ^_^ And poor Hige has no idea what's going on. *snicker*
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AMAZING! you have a great talent. one of the best yaoi ficcys i've ever read -nods- -grabs toboe- MY BISHI!!!!!!! NOT YOURS! -ahems- anyways! its really good you should keep writing! -looks around then whispers- i need more yaoi XD!! bai bai!!!!!! keep it up!
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An absolutely amazing threesome if I do say so myself. Yep, nothing is better than threesomes....well....maybe one large orgy of bishies that would make a girl cry. hee hee hee. Well, anyway, that was an absolutely great story, and commend you on the well done job. Write more great stories. ^ ^
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A hot little PWP... but you desperately need to get yourself a beta-reader...