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Chapter 16 was delicious as expected. I will have to report for Army Duty soon and won't be able to read the upcoming ones. Nevertheless I'm looking forward to your next update. You are an amazing author!! <3 Please keep up the good work!

I didn't know if it was a mistake of some kind but there is no actually story writing on the chapter 13 page. It cuts off after your important note. Otherwise love the story.

Once again, BRAVO!! Thank you so much for continuing this masterpiece. I'm looking forward to more..

This is by far the very best story on this website. It is now 2011 and it's been a while since your last update. I sincerely hope that you will not abandon this wonderful story and I for one along with many others would look forward to an update. You are such a gifted author.

You should continue this. Please I really wanna know what's gonna happen.

Excuse me if I sound totally floored (it's probably because I AM!) when I say this but... THIS IS BY FAR THE MOST AWESOME /ANYTHING/ THAT I HAVE EVER READ! -ahem- At first I was skeptical but even before I had finished the first chapter, I was completely hooked. It's taken me a day at the most to read through every chapter. Very sexy! I thought I would miss Alucard's side of the story, but leaving it out simply made it more interesting. You really have portrayed the characters well, in my eyes anyway.

I don't know if its a glitch in a system somewhere between your brilliant mind and the web page but somewhere along the line the odd word is cut over with a repeat of whatever came next. There isn't a pattern I can spot, but I thought I'd let you know.

I simply cannot wait for your next update! We Aussies ROCK (except in the cricket, it seems)! -chuckles-

Please please please keep writting this story it is very funny and great to read, the interaction with the characters is fantastic.

Please send me a link when you next update the story.

Many thanks!!

Crystal

Um, i was just rereading this when it occured to me that in chapter 7 there's a gap near the end that makes it a little confusing. First Walter's in her room saying okay he could probably get her a new mirror when all of a sudden she was being seduced into drinking her blood. No transition. I don't know if you were aware of this or not but i just thought I'd let you know.

Good god, i can't believe i didn't do this earlier. I though i had done everyone's i'd read. Oh well. Okay, apparently you like to finish things after two years. I hope you do finish this, especially since you said that you had more chapters to go on. I wanna see what happens and it looks promising XD. Keep up the good work!

The sexual tention is not only going to kill her, but i think me as well. Are you trying to kill your poor readers? O.O i certenly hope not who would be there to tell you how wonderful it is? ^^