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by TheDarkBeginning

person Rezalda
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...I think you described the fantasy of every woman who reads PSoH very nicely. ;) It was a good story and an enjoyable read. The sex was VERY hot and exciting. I also liked the DxLeon hints! But I would have liked to know what animal Elizabeth was, as well as the background behind her name (Western/Japanese mix? There has to be a story behind that).

As an afterthought, I'd do T-chan (in his human form, that is).
person Asher
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO, Tet-chan got busted!
I almost feel bad for him, but I think it is only fair, considering how much he pesters Leon.

That may be why she pointed him out and embarassed the hell outta him....

LMFAO you must write more!
person Yaeka
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAHAHAHAH PERFECT! PERFECT! the most 'intimate' parts can be boring sumtimes, i luv urs XD and its funny! HAH! FUNNY I SAY! WRITE WRITE WRITE!
person warconq
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was fricken awesome. You better finish this story because I'm hooked. I really like how the characters that look visably fragile are the most feirce and powerful. I hope you have some slashy goodness too. Till your next chapter. ((^^))

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