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I just went back and reread this story, and I now remember why I loved it so much! You must update. Also you should probably consider getting a beta reader, its fairly obvious that english isnt your native language through your writing. If you need one, I'm free to help. Anyway, love the plot line and the character twists. You are making them out of character, but not to a point where its intolerable. Please just try to not make Aurore a Mary Jane. she isnt now, a lot of great stories with original characters somehow walk down the path of Mary Jane perfectism. Anyway, good luck and update soon!

Yes! I knew he wasn\'t dead... Nice chapie there though I would have make it harder for Shaka to reach to Aurore. Even hugging might be too much for someone who has just been rape. You have make it more of a cliffie!
Waiting for the next chapter
Mu-sama

Hi i read this story, and i really liked it. Hope you will update it soon, and as well i hope hqhmm that the crash that Milo has for someone is for....Maybe Camus? Well anyway, update it soon, and keep it up!

Great story. Please please please update soon! Is Milo\'s crush on Camus?

Oh no! Poor Aurore! And poor Shaka, he must feel awful!!!!! Great story, ansly sly awaiting next chapter.

Great job please continue and updsoonsoon!!! I look forward to reading your next chapters

I'm glad you updated and i was thinking about the fact this plot sorta reminds me of Exroist:The Begging, anyway I hope you update this soon.

a french fan read a storuy about a new french character......

well, what do you prepare for the next chapter, i guess a lot of answers...

baga aga and Aiolos.. have a Yaoi relationship or i have not understood this words?

Nethertheless, (excuse my poor english), I think this fiction is refreshing, but seeing all the gold saints in the same place is disturbing!!

he other commentary will be send in french to the Autor, see you Jay!!

Nice beginning! I wonder what is thatangeange thing in AEgypt that makes people crazy. Will there be some kind of zombies? And I think it was a good idea to have someone accompaining Shaka to AEgypt. Maybe Aurore will help Virgo improve his social abilities...though with those looks, who needs sympathy!!!!! Oh, I almost forget: Aurore said that she refused to be a saint, it would be interesting to know how that happened.

well, cool start .....seems itll become more and more interesting..... cant wait to see what comes next.........and judging by your name... could we expect some familiar yamis turning up?