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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice lemon! I didn't notice this nice little addition to bath time bless, if you don't mind may i archive this one too at viva la kyouke?
Get back to me soon! Keep writing!
Get back to me soon! Keep writing!
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you posted the other one first, make it seem kind of like a mini-series!! Cannot wait for the threesome!
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I don't normally care for pwp, but you did an excellent job of making it sound somewhat romantic. And, to top it off, I like your style. I look forward to reading more of your stories. The stories I normally read in the Inuyasha category haven't been updated and I thought I'd come over here looking for some yaoi. Thanks for an enjoyable hot read.
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL. This was really good, but there was one point that sort of took me out of it. Generally, the climax of sexual intercourse is an 'orgasm'. An 'organism' is a living being. You might wanna change that.
Otherwise, though, this was really good. I was so happy that Kyou was on top. It drives me nuts that just about everyone makes him a whimpering little uke boy! ^_^ Thank you so much for this wonderful bit of smut!
Otherwise, though, this was really good. I was so happy that Kyou was on top. It drives me nuts that just about everyone makes him a whimpering little uke boy! ^_^ Thank you so much for this wonderful bit of smut!