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for Rude Awakenings

by keistje

person Son Goku
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^ OMG ur my fave Fic writer I loved ur \"A Simple Kiss\" on Media Miner ^^ and this story is just as good ^^ please write more cuz ur fics are great and are all in my faves BTW i also loved ur \"Starring down the Barrle\" cuz u were inspired by one of my fave songs. Anyway keep writing ur great at it ^^ YAy *dances in chibi* anyway bye bye now ^^!
person bleedthefreak
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love love!
person heard the owl
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really really really good! I never expected Goku to turn out to be the seme, but it was excellent! Thank you so much for writing and posting for my reading pleasure! ^_^
person Shotakun
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your seme!Goku in this, yet uke!Sanzo isn't completely submissive. Perfect.
person demon45
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Deep Sigh* How I love those two together. You did such a good job on this one. So completely in character for both of them. And so erotic!! How can I ever look at a desk the same way again?? I'll have such images running through my mind. ;) Write more soon!!! A nice LONG story!!
person Me-Nuriko
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, hello! Nice to see you here, too. ^_~
This was written with just as much skill as you use to write. I liked how you let Sanzo long for his comrades even he refused to admit his need for them. Sanzo, Sanzo... when are you ever going to admit your feelings for the rest of the group?
Even though I know Goku can be seme I wasn't expecting him to be here, so that was a nice surprise. Heh, and in spite of that, Sanzo never acts like an ordinary uke and that's nice, too.
person ADiana
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! You just made my evening! Good thing the overhead fan is on. *grin*

Oh, how I enjoy a good bit of Sanzo/Goku smut. Especially when it's well-written. Thanks a million times over! I've always enjoyed your portrayal of their bond. It's how I'd imagine them together - Neither have really changed all that much. In other words, 'it' was always there! ^_^

One small discrepancy. As they are staying in a temple, the woman in the fic who served Sanzo really ought to have been a man. No respectable Buddhist temple of that period would have let a woman near its 'sacred' walls. But, she was a minor character, anyway. Great job with this. I really enjoyed it!

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