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for Breakfast, Lunch, and Dinner

by jadedragon83

person person-sama
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much. The fact that it\'s my favorite pairing and it wasn\'t ooc the flow was good. I would give you a more descriptive review but I\'m pretty lost for it all I can say is I liked it.
person Death over Time (logged off)
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, (claps)

Leon x D forever dude!!

Since you were talking about the lovely parts of a plane... in this story called \"Left Behind\" the first chapter takes place in a plane, and the word cockpit, kept getting seperated during the chapter, so it ended up writting cock-
pit about 5 times or so... I found it ever so amusing
person Anon
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cockpit sounds like some sort of slang for \'vagina.\' I mean, think about it. And this is waaay off topic for a review. Let\'s try to get this on some sort of tract, then ^^; Wonderfully written smut, everyone stayed as in-character as expected while still fucking each others brains out ^_^ whoo hoo smut! Also, \'cause I be ig\'nant, what\'s with the nickname? I\'ve only read the manga, and I don\'t remember seeing it.. and what was the random Chinese? And.. hm. Can\'t think of any real flaws ^_^ Congratulations, you win at life!
person Lu
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the hottest thing I have ever read <3
person joey
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Everybody loves South Park. ^_^
person mala
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good god, that was amazing. Like, you always breathe a little fast reading lemons, but yours went beyond that. Leon and D were in character, and seemed like real people--the way they thought, acted, etc. And South Park is anything but the best show on cable, but the quote was very appropriate. *laugh* I always took Orcot for the somewhat homophobic type, but the idea is...interesting. Really, he\'s just in denial. My favorite thing was your descriptions, though. Almost like a movie, only better. There were a few typos and places where the setences didn\'t quite make sense(mostly in Part 1), but otherwise, AWESOME!
person Null_In_Void
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful, awesome, wonderful.....I can\'t think of a worth word that can describe this fic appropriately...I\'m in awe let\'s just say that ^_^\'
person me
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
person Flamingolo
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*happy sigh* Since my review got deleted somehow, this is my pathetic, quasi-review. Loved this fic, absolutely one of the hottest lemons I\'ve ever read. I adore you!
person Lady Mashala
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEQUILE!!! (ACK! Bad spelling... ><) I love it! You should write a sequile... a dirty one! XD WUHAHAHAHA!!

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