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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
=) Hey.
I canīt believe itīs just first fanfic =), you definitely have a talent in writing, i liked a lot every situation, and the way leon acts all the time around D.
Itīll be great to read a secuel =), or hope to read anything new from you.
Take care.
I canīt believe itīs just first fanfic =), you definitely have a talent in writing, i liked a lot every situation, and the way leon acts all the time around D.
Itīll be great to read a secuel =), or hope to read anything new from you.
Take care.
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, you are so cruel you know that. You right a story that is well written that I keep want to read it again and again, and a sex scean that nearly gives me an orgasam, and yOU ONLY DID ONE CHAPTURE! You are just to cruel. That or your just not confident about how your first story in this anima turned out.
*shudders*
I hope its not the last reasion because trust me you have nothing to be ashamed about.
O' and a nother thing, what ever you do don't take to heart the lack of reveiws you get for this story. this sight is known for its lack of reveiws written by readers. That why they put a Hits count with each story. to show you authers how many people read there stories. And you have had a lot of readers. So do a favure for all those who have reveiwed, and write another chapture. PLEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE! ^^
*shudders*
I hope its not the last reasion because trust me you have nothing to be ashamed about.
O' and a nother thing, what ever you do don't take to heart the lack of reveiws you get for this story. this sight is known for its lack of reveiws written by readers. That why they put a Hits count with each story. to show you authers how many people read there stories. And you have had a lot of readers. So do a favure for all those who have reveiwed, and write another chapture. PLEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE! ^^
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O...your first fic from this fandom.....tis WONDERFUL!!
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ aww.. it was kute! Although that goes under the longest sex scene ever in the history in yaoi. Not that it's a bad thing, mind you! ^_^ anyways, Illy lly liked it!
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just started reading manga about a year ago i am 15 anyways i really like your story so please write more! I LOVE D AND LEON PAIRINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry i am really 19 not 15 i really needworkwork on my typing still great story write more!
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Fucking. Bunnies. *dies* That had to be *the* best Pet Shop of Horrors fanfic I have ever read. *bows low* JD~sama, may I praise you? *_____* *in love* Please write more fic, oh great and powerful JD~sama! (if you were wondering I'm not just a random commenter, that's my pen name ^^;; <= too lazy to login)
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Verrrrrrrry nice. I enjoyed the creative use of ribbon. D's embarrassment over having lubricant was very cute. I definately would like to see how breakfast went on the morning after, though at the end of the fic it seemed it was more likely to be lunch.
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man your good! I was starting to get wet not even half way through. your discription was mind blowing! the blend of rough and loving actions was just how I thought D and Leons first time would be like. I hear by dumb you the best ever Pet shop of Horror yaoi NC-17 writter of all times. please do another chapter I whant to see round two.