rate_review Reviews

Honestly, what\'s with all the explanations about why you suck? The prose is wonderful, damn near pulitzer-worthy compared to some of the idiots who don\'t seem to realize that the english language can be learned past the second grade level. The story is good, the characters wonderfully handled, and far more importantly, they\'re handled CONVINCINGLY. I could see this happening, and you\'ve made it realistic, made it plausible for something like this to happen.

Trust me, you suck not.

One tiny caveat; if you\'re going to add those little end notes at the end, could you more clearly put down where they correspond to?

I read all the chapters and think it is a great plot line you should just make it an on going story

You did an awesome job with this. I\'ve not seen too many fics that out-shine yours and I doubt i\'ll ever find one that paints such an amazing picture of love and lust at the same time. Keep up the great work.

come on man, update this story, its got a lot of potential. please continue. please.

This is a killer story, and you have the character\'s personalities down! I highly encourage you to continue the good work, and hopefully add some new chapters. (By the way you don\'t suck, your whole story was great.)
Clubkid62@aol.com

bsmart. I\'m not sure how you can think you suck, do to the fact that the majority of Authors on AFF get 1-3 reviews per story...And you have 57 on this one Alone. All of your storys are frankly, incredible. They simply are. You go to a level of Detail that Most Authors here can\'t hope to achieve. You have One of the Highest hit rates on the counter. Your work is beutifull, and it inspires. This is my Favorite Story on AFF to date, And I am, and I am certain that anyone who has read your work is aswell, looking foreward to the Eighth Chapter to this Fiction. As I have followed your work, I realize that you take quite some time to update, but the wait is well worth it. Your indepth look into the characters thoughts and feelings is wonderful, the details in your love scenes is breath taking. Your work isn\'t the same old smut in every piece. You go to great lengths to think up good plots, even in some of your earlier works. As far as I\'m concerned, your work is the best, and this one is especially good.

Also, I would like to take a moment and explain the vast majority of AFF viewers to you for a moment. I can do so in one word: Horny.
They may greatly enjoy a story, but not review it do to more...Urgent buisness. So, while one cannot expect as many reviews as one would like, and the ones you get may not be as detailed as you would like, know that your story is enjoyed, and bask in the hit counter mark.

-The G

I love this story. Please update soon! You gotta know that Tenchi\'s problems are just begining. ^_^ But Tenchi doesn\'t care anymore, cause he gets sex!

u hav a lot of spelling errors in the story general. copy it to word perfect or something like it and correct it. repost it latr. despite the errors, a great story

You take time to update, but it is so worth it. I really hope the next xhapter is completed soon though

u do not suck, ur actually pretty good. fuck that, fuckin awesome. plez, dont let this story die here. keep going. plez plez plez plez plez plez keep going.