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for Concubine Chronicles

by bsmartfanfic

person rilly
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!!! I cant wait for the next one!!! How long will it take? - I wanna read about Aeka! :)
person Chrono
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! But, at the risk of sounding like some sick fuck, shouldn\'t Sasami be getting some action too? It just seems fair. I know that if someone told me that they loved me, and then had an orgy in the pool with four other people (including a sibling), I\'d be pretty pissed.
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was HOT. a very detailed and wellrthought out loving scenario indeed.
Snuggle times ! Hehe Trust Washu to say that !

I wait paitentlly for more
person RAW19
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Far from sucking, this is indeed one of the best tenchi stories i\'ve ever seen!
person firelord
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter keep up the great work and post anuther updat soon
person bookeater
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter. You are one of the best author I have ever read. And I check evry week in hope that you update and it\'s sad that you dont do it more often because its rely good. One of the best story about Tenshi Muyo. Please continue Your storie.
person thebigW
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
May a thousand blessings shower down upon you from the heavens, my friend, for:

1) Showcasing Mihoshi\'s other emotional and psychological dimensions, making her into the complete person we all know she is.
2) Having her step up and claim her prize... first!
3) Not having Ryoko kill her for it.
4) Ryoko taking him almost in a vengeful fashion, and making him beg... that sounds about right.
5) I\'m also thanking you in advance for making Ayeka the sluttiest of them all, the whore unleashed, once she gets \'broken in\' (Pleeeeeeeeze!).

Please consider, however, that now that the \'seal\' is broken, someone\'s grades will take a downward spike (time to study? riiight....), and the fields will never again yield another carrot crop.

Oh well, it\'s not like Ryo Ohki can\'t borrow power from one of Ryoko\'s gems, right?

And... What about Sasami??? She\'s too smart not to figure things out sooner or later.

\'Why\'s everyone got a ravenous appetite all of a sudden? And instead of fighting, they\'ve got this stupid grin on their face... all the time...\'

Muy caliente y muy exelente!

W.
person Bo
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story with wonderfull foreplay detail I love how you made all the girls float both ways . Why haven\'t u updated reccently I\'d really look forward For you lemon chapters about the girls and tenchi Update asap Please please update email me when you do or if you need any ideas
person firelord
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a fantastic fanfiction i do hope that you post mor of this story soon.
person firelord
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story cant whait for you to continue

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