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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is it just me or does everybody in your fic want a piece of Mihoshi. Well anyway great story looking forward to reading the more mature parts.
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have a excellent story here, but I am having trouble seeing how fast you developed the female relationships, I understand that they were all frustrated by Tenchi inability to choose one of them but seeing the woman wanting jump into each other panties 3 chapters in is a little quick don't you think. I really like this story. I do wonder how the emotions will play out now that Tenchi has made the Choice. EXCELLENT!
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it is an interesting start, usually when it comes to Tenchi fics and especially yuri fic in this particular fandom always has Tenchi being a mean sob and the woman decide that they have to release all that sexual tension so they use it on themseleves but your always showing how these relationships affect everybody in the household. Good Start.
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is not a waste of time you are doing an excellent job with this story and you don't suck. I am looking forward to seeing how Tenchi manages to keep all of the women happy and what trouble they all can get into. Please post more of this excellent story soon please.
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Anyone who devotes a chapter exclusively to kissing and pulls it off as well as you do deserves thanks.
Thanks. :)
Looking forward to Chapter 5. Go for it, dude. You've got an excellant foundation to work from.
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September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the level of detail you go to in explaining what goes on in everyone's heads. That the entire house is an explosion waiting to happen and Mihoshi is the catalyst is both alarming and exhilirating. Also, you could have made Ayeka the back-stabbing bitch so many would have, but you allowed another facet of her personality to emerge. Please continue because, contrary to your assertions, it doesn't suck.
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story it doesnt suck but i like it more if more was completed but hey i can wait.
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I thought maybe u abondoned this story! Glad i was wrong. Looking foward to the next chapter.
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looking very good, keep going. This looks very promising...maybe one of the few good "Tenchi chooses 'em all" fics. :)
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is looking great