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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Though I am not a big fan of oral in slash, you did a very good job giving the character's depth and thought so it was worth reading.
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As an avid 38/83 supporter myself, this was much enjoyed. Ja!
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I <3 you for this. I suck at giving constructive criticsm, but I really didn't see anything wrong with this. It was as descriptive as it needed to be, while still leaving something to the inatination <3. We need more 383 BDSM like this XD.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
??WTH? I? At any rate, I had this nice long review typed up for ya, but I guess AFFnet ate it >P. Just know that I think you did great with this <3
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD very nice. I liked how you really capitalized on those Hakkai/Sanzo moments... props! As always, detail is welcome and should be your very best friend ;) Don't be afraid to lather it on! However, nice one shot, keep up the writing!