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for Darkness Drowning

by GhostHelwig

person FallenAngel411
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god....I don\'t know what to say.....I\'m still crying......I\'ve never cried this hard before....I love everyone in Fruba too, too, too much.......and they died........It felt so REAL........you are.......AMAZING. I...I really don\'t know what to say...I will remember this forever...
person Caleigh
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is honestly THE best Fruits Basket fic I think I\'ve ever read.
I\'ve already come back twice to reread it. (This is my third reading, and I thought I should leave a little note. ^_^ )
The ending was... amazing, for lack of a better word. The very last line just leaves everything on the perfect note, on the perfect thought.
All of the characters were excellently written, and the writing style was equally impressive.
Keep up the phenomenal work ^_^

~ C
person Messiah of Darkness
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
..................wow. That was..........amazing. Sadistic, horribly cruel maybe-but amazingly written with a captivating ending. Are you sure you\'ve been acquanted with Fruits Basket for only a short time? That story was gorgeous. Keep writing.
person Anastasia
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.....im speechless....


it was...

cry crying.


it was beautiful.


i loved it.

......i loved it.
thats all i can say.


.....all i can say.

person Naria Lacour de Fanel
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel..disturbed...o.O...


You DREAMED that?! How could? I mean...WHY?! So much sadness!! And damn the Mabudachi Trio!! DAMN HATORI!! DAMN SHIGURE!! But Aya's still ok by me, since he becomes such a badass!! But that whole story was so sad!! Poor Haru...Poor everyone!!! And the tenderness w/ Yuki and Kyo was uber cute, but tragic, like Romeo and Juliet! And Tohru dying is like Old Yeller!! Well, maybe not...more like Gandhi...But, yeah!! That was soooooooooooooooooooo sad...I felt my heart fall out, it went ker-splat when Yuki died holding Kyo's hand...Oh geez, it's making me cry just thinking about it again!!! But that means you wrote a great story, even if it is painful and scary!! I'm just glad all this anger and pain was taken care of by SOMEONE i.e. the sassy snake! I dunno, if some deranged asshole pervert insane clan head kilevereveryone I cared about, I'D go medieval on his ass!! YEAH!! I have a strange mix of anger and sorrow..it's all so confusing! I just wanna say I hope nev never dream of anything like that ever again!! Good dreams from now on, ok? ^_^
person woww
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm honored that you reviewed my ficc, seeing as how you yourself are an -awesome- writer!!!! Thanxx sooo much for all the support and compliments. You have no idea how much it helps in encouraging me to write on!!! and this ficcy...AWESOME!!!!!! much love -Abby ~_^
person Hayle
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey me again. i'm reviewing for a friend of mine that doesn't have internet access. she adores fruits basket, so i read this to her over the phone and she started crying! she said it was the best story she ever heard and that she will worship you forever (i have weird friends). so... thats it....
person Wodka
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...ending a little bit short...but I loooove Akito...although he´s a bit too evil in this one.
a little mistake: there are "two" many people here?
person Hayle
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
... wow ... that's all i can think to say ... wow ... i live for tragedies, and stories like this one are i l i live at all. this was amazingly well written ... amazing ... i'm awestruck ... speechless ... this was a dream? you sound like me! all my stories come from dreams too ... which is why i stay up as late as i can, because some of the anime tragedies i dream get kind of disturbing ... to disturbing for me to even describe .... yeah ... i need help ....
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you both for your comments - I really appreciate all the support, & that you took the time to review & tell me how you feel. Thank you so much!

And I fixed the mistake, thank you for pointing it out to me. I hate leaving things like that in my work...

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