rate_review Reviews

that was sooo good. I loved it too death. I was shocked nobody saw it though

Wow! I loved this story. You two set such a wonderful mood. I loved how you had Vash and Meryl showing their affections through playfulness. This story was such a welcome change from all of the angst ridden stories you normally see. Not tho those aren't good, but it was nice to see those two actually being able to just be happy with each other. All in all, a great PWP! Oh, and the sex scene was amazing.

Very cute, but sensual at the same time. A very good read, I especially liked the fact that it focused solely on the couple without trying to tie in any of the other characters. Great work!

Aww, that was nice. Really, really... reeeeeally nice ^_^ So glad you two are at it again!!! Thank you, you living dolls!

Oh yeah - and I love the way your grammar and spelling kicks ass, and the way you interjected Vash's sweet sense of insecurity that only Rem's memory used to lve lve and that's now directed at Meryl's love for him. If that sounds right... Anyway, just thought I should say more than "me like story". ^_~

Yay! We finally have another Vash/Meryl from you! I think this was your best yet--the humor was as good as the sex, and Vash in particular was hilarious all the way through. All I can say is write more!