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person Anon
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person KyrosMage
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FOR THE LOVE OF KAMI PLEAZE FINISH THIS!!!!!
person Asher K.
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
--____________________-- Me agree with that person. This just needs some good-old-fashioned closure!!
person Tari K.
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD WAIIIIIIIIIIIIII! U MUST FINISH!! *evil cliffhangers...*
... hehehe, this is sooo funny, and i\'m curious...
person Nicole
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now i know what you mean about the cliffhanger thing, i might havta hit you tuesday! haha update soon! =), my aim s/n is volcombabe0x IM me if you want
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE DAMN IT!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COOLNESS NEXT CHAPTER NOW!!!!!!!!
person Baka Basu
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww why do have to make Ryo cry ???? well any way its good if i read more than one chappies i like it a lot!!!!!!
person cyanide01
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good so far! I can\'t wait to read the next part!!!!! I wanna find out what happened with Ryo!
person Lorella
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well it\'s a good strory but assome people have pointed out there are a few spelling mistakes and you should paragraph out more, but that has gotten better each chapter so keep it up. OH and just one more thing! i HaTE CLIFFHANGERS! THAT\'S JUST MEAN! hehe! Please hurry up and writer the 4th chapter. i GOTTA know why Ryo is crying! I never like it when he does that!

(Lorella is my writer\'s name on here I just haven\'t been able to log in for some reason. Might have to do with thios stupid computer I\'m using at an internet cafe!)

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