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for Cyber Fun!

by DeeLaytner

person Anon
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did Ryo just ask Dee if he wanted to have cyber sex? Shy Ryo?! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Deelaytner
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks to all of you who keep reading
person anna
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why is Ryo crying? Oh! You're so naughty for leaving it there! I think YOU need punished! *Pulls out whip* If you don't update soon....*Cracks Whip*
person KD
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know you want it, don't you Dee? (grins)
Wooooo! Start the cyber sex! It's soooo hot!
person Deelaytner
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for all your reviews i'm typing chapter 2 as we type.
person JJ
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG! *hugs you* I can't wait for the next chapter! XD *Big grin*
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i want to thank you so much for you reviews they mean alot to me thanks
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a decent story. A couple of mispelled words here and theut nut nothing to serious. Also this story was a little rushed and really didn't go anywhere. Could of used some space between paragraphs to help with the reading. Now I am not dissing your work I really do hope to see you keep writing also hope to see you update soon.
person anna
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do a chapter 2! I want to see what happens next!
person Anon
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good so far. Please continue!!!

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