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Bleh. It cut off my signature T-T.

" With Love from your Long-Time Lurker-san,
Melody "

I thank thee for thy praise. It has been a long time, hasn't it? And to think, I came in when you were only up to chapter 5 and hadn't subjected poor Sakura-Chan to the auction yet! Of course, all this time I was waiting for just one full Sakura X Syaoran sex scene -- arguably, I have been cheated. But I'll live. Even i never did get what I originally started reading for, hehheh, I did enjoy the story all around anyway, and that sufficiently made up for it. I may even save it down within the next few days, just so I can one day re-read it from scratch at my leisure without fear of suddenly losing it for all time. At any rate, it's been fun, so take a rest, you've earned it! And having glanced at your FF.net account, I think I will take a gander at Wild Flower. (I happen to be among the Firefly/Serenity fans who got the DVD box set, watched it, and said, "We were robbed!") Well, I can't think of anything else to say, so, I guess this is....gulp...it... L...l...l...laters....

First of all let me say, Its been a great ride and I'll miss being able to look forward to the next installation of your great work almost every week or 2. The fact that it was a Card Captor Sakura fanfic i consider to be merely incidental, you managed to go far beyond that from almost the beginning an create an original story which managed to captivate and enthrall on its own merits rather than simply riding the coat tails of its fan-fiction basis. It will be a challenge for you to transform it into an original work as you will have to build on certain points to provide them the weight of background which being a fanfic allowed them automatic fixture i grant you, but I am confident that you will easily locate and enhance them with your own visions of the history of that world...

What I'm most of all trying to say is, I think you are an excellent writer, for which you are loved and respected by us your readers. It was YOU and not the grey mist of the base material you used which drew in and captivated you this audience.

And if i ever manage to recognize your work should you publish i'll be getting me a copy. ^_^

-Himitsu The Hunter

Congratulations on ending your story! I didn't know that bebeautiful was accepting submissions from English authors for novels. Or maybe you were intending to make pleasure slave into a manga which is very cool. But I don't think they are accepting anything but Japanese manga at the moment. I do know that if you want to make this into manga you have a few choices like yaoipress who actually specialize in original English works, Tokyopop does so to but not anything this explicit. Dramaqueen has a original English publication called Rush, but I'm not sure if they are accepting admissions. Those are all for Manga submissions though I think Yaoipress will pair writers with artists. On the Flip side if you are looking to rewrite and publish this as a book since its more of the yaoi style then Slash you might want to consider LooseID, eXtasy books, Torque press or even some even smaller presses that are starting up now. I do know the majority of the writers who I've seen jump from fanfiction to published fiction and stick to the alternative lifestyle theme usually self publish which you might consider. Of all those previously mentioned I remember Yaoipress and Loose ID both posting they were looking for submissions in the last few months. Good luck on your future endeavors! I do hope you don't take this review as an insult in anyway I just thought you wouldn't mind a little help with the publishers.

I knew it! I knew it was you!!! XD (Well, actually, I started reading this right from the first chapter when you linked to it from a Peacewish account SOMEWHERE, so uh... yeah. I thought I'd been hallucinating after it changed on me. >_>; but then it did sound like your writing. Bah.)

Hehe, I'm so happy it's done and everyone is happy!!! You left us on a lot of cliffhangers =P But yay! I did wish there was a little more mention of Tomoyo and Meiling in the later chapters, since it felt like they just dropped off the map. XD But it's all good! I love rereading all the tearjerking parts. I shall reread this from start to finish, er, once I find the time to... =_=; Stupid university.

wow, this story completely blew me away. it was so awesomely written and i loved every chapter of it. i never reviewed but was quite happy to read it all along. i love the Toya and Yue pairing and this is by far the best story i have ever read concerning these two. i was also quite happy with the Li and Sakura pairing even though i'm not much of a fan. but thats okay because everything in this story was so well done i loved it all. it was amazing and i was so happy to read it and i'm sad to see it end but it was a great accomplishment. i'm thrilled for you. the descriptions and style of writing made it so easy to imagine everything that went on in this story and i feel every chapter was done with great success! good luck!! ^_^

ZOMG! Loveeeees it!
what do i do with my life now! XD

i love ur story, tx u sooooo much 4 finishin it

Dear Capitalist,

I wasn't luky enough to know your story form the beginning. But it took more than a week of my life! I only remember this week as reading Pleasure Slave, I must have been at work (because I stil have the job), but those days are only flashes between chapters of Pleasure Slave. One night I only read Pleasure Slave instead of sleeping.

Perhaps now I'm saying someting false, but I have to. I do not even know "Card Capture Sakura", I didn't read or watch it. But your Story only was greate enough to catch me. All on top I dislike to read about gay sex (don't misunderstand me, I don't hate gay people or so. I just don't want to know anything about ther sexlive *cringing*), but I endured it to follow Pleasur Slave.

I realy hope you finde a publishe for you work! And I hop you will tell us. (*haha* I'm still not able to find that mysterios Yahoo-group???)
If you don't publishe it, I hope you give us the authorization to make a book out of the story for ouerselfs.

I don't know how to reakt to the end of Pleasure Slave. Shuld I cry, panic or be happy? But one thing I know:
Thank you for this greate story! Thank you for so many happy hours! Thank you for plesure, happines, pain, thrill and so mutch more emotions.

Greatings
Juy Juka

you are probably one of the best writers I have read, not only on this site but the best writer period. And I hope when you do get published you tell us, I would love to continue reading your work. Reading this story was one of the most enjoyable things in my life, even when the story brought forth overwhelming feelings. I hope only for the best for you in life. Thank you for sharing your vision.