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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This chappie was awesum!
Go Touya go! *waves pom-poms in the air like a frantic fan girl*
And I LOVE the Yue-dom thing going on... it's not really expected.
SAKURA AND SYAORAN FOREVER!
And YAY! to ralen getting his face smashed in by the oh-so-lovebale-uke-knight TOUYA! XD
I love your work! Update soon please!
~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
person alpha_paper
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. I don't mind the long wait, really, every time you post an update, it's always worth it. I love this chapter! So many things had happened and I can't tell which one I loved the best! That Touya finally punched the living daylights out of Ralen... I have to tell you, I actually cheered out loud! Go Touya! I think maybe even Yue had wanted Touya to punch Ralen! LOL. I think, somehow, he could've stopped Touya easily...Meilin is such a character! I love how you write her. Bringing her in the story... she's some sort of a catalyst. She comes in and *bam!* I love it. I hope we'd be seeing more of her in the coming chapters. I could see her as matchmaker of some sort. The way Sakura and Syaoran's relationship had developed... I liked it that it wasn't at all rushed and they have (or at least Sakura) moments of blushing around each other. It's adorable and sweet and seems a great equalizer to the rather general dark, angsty mood of the fic. Touya and Yue. Ah, what can I say... you write them so perfecty. Everything they do and say, I could clearly picture it inside my head. I wonder what Yue has in store for Sakura. I don't know how you do, but everytime I read your updates it makes me want the story more... my devotion to this story is well... it's cemented! I'll still check daily for updates! And if there are none, it's absolutely fine, take your time, I love re-reading your fic. Every chapter reads like a new one and there's something new to discover! Thanks again for the brilliant update! I know I sound like some rabid-fan girl... hehehehe. Sorry about that... anyway, just a random question, how do you find the Touya and Yukito of TRC? I love Touya in black! He's so gorgeous! Well, that's it for a rather long review! Looking forward to your next update! Take care! Hope you had a wonderful Xmas and New Year!
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So... just to make clear, Yue and Touya won't be a happy lovely couple in the end? *I had those Disney fuzzies*
And when will Yue and Touya kiss? Isn't Touya curious at all?
Well, that was an unexpected chapter. *I'm still cheering for Touya and Yue after all*
I still wonder if Yue will get tired of Touya, if perhaps Touya starts to act like a slave.
At first, when I read this aff I thought it would there would be some kind of sex between Touya and Sakura. Or, that Yue would torment Touya by making sex with Sakura. But I will leave that kind of stuff for you to write.
Ok then, keep updating, hope you are having a good new year! \O/
person Sakura-chan
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have finally read the rest of this! It is so good! You must continue or I will kill you. I'm serious! I will! *grabs Syaoran's sword*

Syaoran: Hey, WFT?!

Me: Step aside! *knocks him over* .... *is mauled by Meilin*

Meilin: How dare you touch Syaoran!

Me: @_@

person Sakura-chan
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! *cries* I am only on Chapter 4 and it is so sad! Poor Sakura-chan! I thought for sure Kero-chan would have saved her, but I guess Clow magic doesn't exsit in this... It is a good story, but I feel so bad for Sakura-chan! I am crying like a baby over here. ;_; Come on Tomoyo-chan! Help, Sakura-chan!

As I point out. I have only read 1-4. ;_;
person Korinna
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, please, I wait for your update with baited breath
person Alejandra
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like your story so far. Hope you can continue it soon. There are few people who can create a good story and you nailed it. The suspense and drama were a great touch to the story.
person Ruri
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really sure if I've ever reviewed this story before, I don't think I have...But I should've! This is a lovely story with smooth transistions and I just adore everything about it! You've turned me into a YueXTouya fangirl, and I might add Touyas character portrayal and constant reminders that he's "Not a Slave" is just amazing. I truly enjoy reading this story, because you are a very talented writer. This story rocks, and I'm glad to be one of it's many adoring fans. Can't wait to read more. ^_^

-Ruri
person inuyasha nut
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me love dis fic
wen will u update
person ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How much longer until the next chapter?
You've been keeping me sane! Please, PLEASE update soon!

~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~

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