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I am floored by your exquisite writing ability. This is, quite possibly, the most delightful and interesting "cliched and trite pornfic" I've ever read. The characterizations are perfection for the setting, and the interactions between the characters are natural and believable. Plus, t3h pr0n is delish. I'm really loving reading about bottom!Touya. =^.^= I'm looking forward to (RE: anxiously anticipating) the next installment of your story.

Also, may God bless you for being able to properly type in English! I'm a stickler for good grammar, spelling, etc., and to find something so free of glaring errors on the 'net is, frankly, a miracle. I am certain there is a spot reserved especially for you in Porn Heaven. And that sounds like the name of some sort of sex shop, so methinks I'll be stopping here. Best wishes!

Hello!! I just want to tell you that your story rocks! One of my favorite so far cause it has a great story line that does make sense and not just hentai, sex sex sex!! It's very cute and the characters still have characteristics of that in the anime so I really look forward to reading more of your story! I love how yue is falling in love with touya and there somthing that I hope won't happen which is that someone's going to trick him into thinking that touya is a meanperson/traitor and yue will start being mean to him again and I hope that you write more about sakura soon cause I'm not too much into the man to man thing and I hope yiou start on sakura. ^_^! There's also somthing that I'm hoping you wont do which is make Li's cousin (dance instructor) mean to sakura and trick her and Li.... i REALLY LIKE YOU STORY!! gREAT JOB!!!

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Oh my gosh you have to update! I'm going crazyyy!

I can't remember my username and password..so..eh..sorry ^_^;
I really love this story though! I've been keeping up with it for a long time now, actually. I just never realized until a few months ago that I could review without having a username! I have to say, this is a pretty amazing story for an "adult" fic. It's so intriguing and wonderful! ^___^ It really makes me happy that you continue writing it! I know that you don't update often, so I don't come here that often, but every time I do I always check to see if there's a new chapter. Lucky me there has been! ^__^ I hope you update again soon! Aparently it's been a long time, so perhaps I won't have to wait too long? Who knows.. Thank you for writing though, and I hope you still plan on continuing this!

Plz hurry up and update i've been waiting such a long time i can't take it anymore T_T

Good, good. Love the story, and glad the chapters are of a decent length. Keep it up, onegai.

This story is... well, beautiful. I love every single one of your descriptions including their sex scenes. ^///^ Another big plus is everyone doesn't rush in and jump each other. While I'm very fine with that, a backround story and plot in general make a story really good. I also like where they all stand in their story, especially the uke Touya. I cheered when I found that out since not many people I've seen make him that way and a seme Yue is much too hard to resist. (no pervy pun intended.) I'm also glad that the yuri pair was Tomoyo and Sakura, I just started the manga and if it ever had any yuri, they seem to be the most likely. Many kudos on making a story last this long, a lot of people give up before the first 5 months or so. This review probably sucks since I've never been very good at them, but I very much hope you'll continue soon!
-Anonomous fan a.k.a "Virgo's Kiss"

Every new chapter I read, I die of glee. You're amazing at writing, and you've got so much talent in describing every occurence, without sounding overly flowery or vulgar in the lemons. Pleasure Slave = Bookmarked FOREVER. <3 Keep up the awesome story; don't leave us hanging halfway! ^^

This great! A bit boring during first few chapters but as story progress I can't take my eyes off!
It never occured to me that Yue can be aggressive but man! This surely change my mind!!!!
Next chapter pls!

Now, i hate to be a pushie pushie...but do you think that maybe we could have another chapter by Christmas? Think what a nice gift to readers that would be! *hint* *hint* Thank you in advance!