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PLAESE UPDATE!!! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!!!! I'LL EVEN GIVE YOU IDEAS lol....But please update soon.

Wow. I must say, this fic totally blew my mind! I feel like I've found a gem; it's so rare these days, that there's a fanfic with both detailed sex scenes, such a great storyline AND character development. I adore yaoi, yuri and light hinting of straight couples, so every chapter of this fic was definitely enjoyable to read. I am glad that the yuri pairing turned out to be Tomoyo x Sakura. The pairing Yue x Touya really surprised me! I've never heard of this pairing before, so it never crossed my mind. This is the first fic I've read that featured this pairing, and you've managed to turn Yue x Touya into my favourite CCS yaoi pairing. The character development and relationships portrayed in this fic is amazing! I agree with quite a few of your reviewers; I really love the relationship between Yue and Touya, and how they are slowly but surely falling for each other, though both of them won't admit it. Meilin's sudden appearance didn't really surprise me; I knew that she would show up somewhere in this fic. I was very happy at the way that she treated Ralen (the guy really deserved it! Someone should stomp him in the nuts...). One thing that I hope for, though, is that Meilin doesn't try to gain Syaoran's attention sexually; if there are to be any straight pairings, I hope that it'd be Syaoran and Sakura.
Overall, this is an excellent fic that I am sure to recommend to my yaoi/yuri loving friends. I look forward to the next chapter, and hope that you'll update soon (and not four months later like some of your reviewers mentioned). Thank you for finding the time to write this fic! ^_^

'mazing, absolutely A-MA-ZING! *finished all 20 chapters in one sitting* I am a late comer, yes, but I AM glad that I read this at all! I dunno where to begin, except with maybe, p'raps, that your muse is Teh WINZ!!!111one!1eleven xD

The whole story, it's written extremely smoothly and flows along perfectly, and the way you use words is Really Good. And, and, um, update soon pwease ^o^;; *gives you big box of motivation* Go on! You rock, yay~ :D

wow, its cool, but i think there should be more sakuraXlo

Hello,
Ive been waiting a little les than patiently for the next chapter.
That said I basically have to restrain myself from smashing my
computer into a million tiny pieces. So I figured that maybe if I
reviewed you would type a little faster.
My review is as follows. This story has it's good and bad pionts.
I love the pairing and the story lineand to be truthfully honest
the not so nice scene could actually be alot worse. So I thank
you. Please put up the next chapter. I really want to read how
toya and yue's relationship will progress.
Thank you for yourtime and imagination,
Holly

Plz....make new chappies ...I'm dying here....I wanna know
what will happen now....Plz update sooooooon.....
Cuz I can't wait no more.....Your chappies are soooo goood
I just keep reading and reading.... Idon't get
fed uo with your story cus there sooo coool....
But plz update as soon as you can....

Pleeeaasseeee update sooooooon!!! PLEASE!!! WE\'RE BEGGING YOU!!!!!

more more! :)

I must say sr that i have not reviwed on the last two chaps..To state off i just what to say that i love this story soo much that its worth the wait just to be able to read another chap..I really love how everything is progressing with Meilin..Li and Sakura\'s relationship seems to be progressing nicely.^__~..anyway i just want to say that the discription of the room in which Yue stays all day is so beautiful that i wish such a place was real..When Toya said that he would obey i was really happy...it was such a good lemon..Anyway plz take ur time and i just want to say how happy i am always with how long u make the chaps..if u took u as long as it did and the chaps. were short that would really suck..but yay that is not the case with this..anyway i hope that ur well..Ja Matta Ne..^-^

This is sooooooo good! I just engulfed three chapters and I feel my insides turn jelly. Such a wonderful sensation, I love it. The first lovemaking of Toya and Yue was beautiful and left me with a singing heart. I love the way Yue said please when he asked Toya to read, I can just picture the scene, so lovely and warm and just fuzzy. I love Meilin, she is just great and I adore her when she grips Ralen\'s balls and crush them! I hope will see more of Tomoyo.
It\'s such a great story, I am ready and willing to go to the second half! Let\'s read!