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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person S. St. James
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! I saw the first chapter and I sat down and read the rest of it. Took me all night...didn\'t get any homework done... but that was no problem. Keep on going!

person jam
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! good for you! i love this story...and i hope to one day witness the end of this lovely fic, very well written by the way. good job.
person Kaitos-Michael
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when Meilin was going to show....
person minn yun
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic! more n more of it, soon!! thank you!!! this really is a great work.
person mild69
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update!!!!!! please..... been reading it for 3 straight hrs... from the first to the twentieth... hehe... too long i think, i mean me reading.... the fic was cool... hehe....
person Napolde Tinuviel
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rarely do I go outside the Harry Potter fandom, but damn, I\'m glad I did, for I wouldn\'t have read this story if I hadn\'t! I would\'ve sent you an email, but I\'m missing lunch as it is just so I can finish reading the latest chapter and review the story.

My reaction: Just... wow. I\'m shaking, or maybe that\'s just the strong coffee I just drank. I like Touya\'s slow surrender to Yue, and Yue\'s fascination and (eventual) fall for Touya. Very reminiscent of Ai no Kusabi, I must say, which is probably my favourite yaoi anime ever. It\'s so delicious... I can\'t get enough of their encounters, especially in the last chapter. Also, I think Sakura\'s innocence is adorable, Syaoran is delightful, and their characterizations stay true to the original, which is a difficut thing to achieve in AUs, but you did it. Tomoyo is wonderful, and the yuri between her and Sakura was lovely (and I didn\'t mind it, which is quite a miracle, haha). And Meilin! I hope she\'s not in love with Syaoran; it didn\'t seem that she was, still, I hope she\'s not because Sakura and Syaoran are just too cute, and I wouldn\'t want to see her hurt. :) Ralen... heh, the classic villain. You write very well; I\'m glad to have found this fic amidst a fandom filled with cliched, sickeningly sweet AU fanfics. Your story has a balance of angst and romance that I prefer. Kudos.

Can\'t wait for more!


~Napolde
person Bakura
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s great ^^

glad you updated.
person chi
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u updated!!!
pls do so again soon
person Red Crow
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This has to be the BEST chapter to date!!!!!!!! Holy shit that was so hot when Toya finnally agreed to participate. I actually reached over and turned the phone off so no one would interupt the feel of the story. And the sceen at the end was positivly priceless. I usually really hate fanfics where the characters are put in some weird made up AU. ie Sakura being a princess, Yukito being the lead singer in a rock band. But I can\'t tell you how MUCh I love this one. And it\'s not even for the smutty parts either (tho\' that Does help ;]) You\'ve managed to write a seamless romance here. One worth reading because it doesn\'t follow that same old formulaic brand of slave falls for master. Pleasure slave is a wonderfull read that makes no excuses or promises to anyone. Unabashedly so might I add. And yet it\'s still the hottest thing out there. I love it. 100 % hooked. Thank you so very much. I hope the next chapter isn\'t long in comming.

Oh, and will Clow Reed ever make an apperance?
person Yaoi_Luver
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write the next chapters i couldnt stop reading once i started it :)

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