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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person nomoonorstars
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written..a lot of lemons are poorly written and have no plot, but you write really well...yeah. good job.
person Velika
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! Really good story you\'ve got! Like it a lot. =) Just a question, is it only yaoi/yuri? I mean, will there be something between Li and Sakura? It would be so cool if it where to be... but hell, you\'re the author, do as you please. Great story, again, and keep it up! (Y)
person hisoka kurosaki
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I\'m so in love with this story it should be illegal. I look forward to your updating!
person ada-chan
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe first time reviewer although meh been reading this fic for quite a long time now... meh really likee dis ficceh of urs... it\'s so very very nice... of course, me wish syao-syao would appear more often... and there is the issue of not enough Sakura time going on here... me wanna see sakura in more sakura-ish action... maybe you can make her befriend the chef that makes her food everyday ehehe... that\'s a thought isn\'t it?

maybe you can make dah chef Yukito... and den sak\'s so interested in his cooking and stuffehz or whatever-ness... and comes to dah gardens with Li less and less and Li starts wond\'rin where the friggin hell Sak-sak is and when he discovers she\'s off with the cook he\'s all depressed and stuff... maybe he\'ll realize stuff about sak-sak and how beautiful she is and he\'ll get so horneh thinkin about her... hehe... okee... meh thinks me in an overload right now... newayzzzzz...

it\'s fun readin the reviews of this story as it is readin the story itself... so far mah fave reviewers of this story are.... AYACHAN, SCORPINAC and other random people who me thinks are the same people but can\'t seem to decide on one damn friggin name hehe... okeee me thinks me getting paranoid again...

newayzzzzzzz... me thinkin a yukitoXsakXsyao thing going on in mah twisted derranged mind

oooooooooooooh yeah... ehehe... btw... ne1 want a decent avatar or sumthing? meh not really dat satisfied with avatars here hehe... if u guyz wantz sumthing better maybe u could check out meh profile and read wut i gotz in mah discription about the avatar thingehz... hehehe

eheeeeheeeheeeheheeeheeeheee....

bidding goodbye to mah derranged self and to all those reviewers that i pay shooooooooooooooooooo much of mah attention toh....^////^ :3
person star
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your fanfic! please dont ever stop writing! :)
person ada-chan
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
btw... mah friggin penname is skip_over_me for the profile thingeh thingeh about the avies... ehehe am shoooooo weird... ehehehehehe

meh don\'t even know why meh chose that nam... maybe for lack of decent names and for sake of complete and utter randomnessssssss
person orangieorange
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i soooo luv your story! I find that I\'m always looking foward to your next chapter eager to see what happens to touya and sakura next. You\'ve definately done a great job of reeling me in with your story, keep up the good work!

OrangieOrange
person Alanna_Goddess
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chappie!! It\'s getting goood.. I can\'t wait to read more.. Post as soon as you can! Byes
person Aleanach
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh and i found a tiny spelling mistake...not very noticible, but you could try to correct it.....
person Outlaw Angel
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....Man Touya had won but lost also....Woopie....I like how your
story is going....With all Yue and Touya here....Soo cool
Plz update I wanna see what will happen between those two
if they will fall in love or something...

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