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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person Aleanach
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to know that you decided to prove me wrong.
I always wondered if writing such review that would
make an author write and post the story faster.
Obviously it did.
I think I\'ll try it on the others....but i doubt that
they would take up such a challenge, as you have.

nice writing......
person luckyducky7too
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I enjoyed this chapter the most. Meilin just brings so much energy to the story. And we can already see that she is starting to dig into Syaoran\'s personal feelings for Sakura. Please update soon!
person Korinna
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s been a while since I\'ve checked the sight but I was happy to see when I did that this story had not just one update, but two! I was more than happy to read both of them in one sitting. I\'m most certaintly looking foreward to your next update!
person Ekki
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s so nice to see something on here with a plot and character development. Much love for you, my dear. XD Most looking forward to the next chapter~.
person JB
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter. Keep up the good work and update ASAP! I wonder if the book they are reading will contain information about Yue\'s past? He is old and has been there for a very very very long time.
person Clover
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so shocked to see the next chapter of pleasure slave up so quickly, though of course very thankful! It\'s such a great story. I\'m sorry my review isn\'t helpful criticism but i enjoy it a lot so can\'t really fault it. Please keep going and i\'ll read it whether there\'s a weeks wait or four months.
person PockyFille
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bookmarked this story when it was on chapter 18... gave it a review on 19... started checking every day for chapter 20...and now i can\'t wait for chapter 21!
This is excellently written, the characters are handled well... 5 out of 5 squees for you!
person Morwen Re
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good! and thank you for updating so soon! i just happened to be checking this morning to see if you had updated, not thinking that you would have but hoping none the less, and got a pleasant surprise. it was a sweet chapter and i i think its my favorite chapter as well!
person Blackrose
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good. Glad to hear Tory and Yue are getting along. Hope to see some romance between Sakura and Li. I love the way you\'ve made Meiling. She\'s a real cool chick. Please update soon.
person Ephe
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kyaa~! You updated early! I check at least once a week for your story after I found it around chapter 15. =)
BTW, is there going to be other couplings in here as well? (SS?)

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