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^_^...this is like the ONLY CCS fanfic that i wait for....
visiting this site and checking to see if there is an update JUST
for this fic....and there is <3<3<3...

I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!....i was like this =D reading it.....YAY on Yue and Touya....
seems like the relationship is going somewhere now ^_^....

there soooo cute....at least Yue isnt that cold now^_^....just need more angst
since they are getting good....some RAPE some where.....for Touya or attempt^^\"\"
hehehe...thats what like to see....^^::....

well i cant wait to read what is gonna be in the next update....since they are getting
cute with one another^_^

I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!....i was like this =D reading it.....YAY on Yue and Touya....
seems like the relationship is going somewhere now ^_^....

there soooo cute....at least Yue isnt that cold now^_^....just need more angst
since they are getting good....some RAPE some where.....for Touya or attempt^^\"\"
hehehe...thats what like to see....^^::....

well i cant wait to read what is gonna be in the next update....since they are getting
cute with one another^_^

I have to agree with random. I litarlly gasped when Yue said \"Toya\", and again when Touya said Yue\'s name. It was a beautiful moment. Then Yue had to go and ruin things by getting all scared and chase him out. That man\'s more afraid than Touya is, and less likely to admit it.

yay! I can\'t believe you updated so quickly! Thank you so much! Meilin is so funny, but Ralen needs to see that he isn\'t the boss of everyone besides Yue once in a while. Poor Touya, must be torture for him. Anyways, I\'m sure that the second half will be just as good as the first half, if not better. Looking forward to reading more, baibai!

aaaahhh... it truly is worth it, checking for updates everday! There were many so brilliant things on this chapter that if I list them down, I might as well repost the whole story. But here are a few of my favorites: Meilin! It\'s so lovely to see her make her appearance. I like her assertiveness and how I wish she could teach Sakura not just dancing but a bit of attitude too. The girl needs it. I wonder how Ralen would react to it if that happens! Ha! I have a feeling that Touya would more likely blow his top over the prospect of Sakura having dance lessons. I can so see him now, \"Your practicing what? In front of who?! Grrrrr!\" LOL.

Everything about Touya and Yue is just... lyrical. The way you write Touya\'s feelings and thoughts is so gut-wrenchingly real. I don\'t know how else to describe it. I most especially loved the part where Meilin mention that Sakura was pretty and Syaoran replied that she was \"beautiful.\" I can\'t wait for more Syaoran and Sakura moments. And although I am all for Sakura and Syaoran, there\'s also something so terribly sexy about Meilin teaching Sakura to dance. I don\'t know where I got that vibe at all, but I did. LOL. But I really am looking forward to more S/S interaction.

I think the best bit though, the one that beats everything that I just said is when I read that we\'re only halfway through the story. OMG! There\'s more to come and please do keep them coming. Please, please, please do. Looking forward to the update. I\'ll definitely check back for updates tomorrow morning. Until the next updates (until the very end of this fic), I remain, one of your many, many fans. -ms. paper

awsome, not only was it fast it was good too, i loved this chapter it\'s one of my favorites and meilin was hilarious

OMG!! I LOVED THIS PART!!! PKEASE WRITE MORE!! PLEASE!!!!!!

Just so you know, yes, I did read this chapter. I was going to abstain from any comments until I had something truly productive to say, but I\'m beginning to think that isn\'t going to happen since that\'s also what I said about chapters 18-19.
Even if I don\'t totally agree with the way you write Meiling, I like it. And the subtle (fond) rivalry between her and Syaoran was very familiar to me re: most of t_d.
I did like the ball-grabbing. Fun for the whole family. But Ralen was a bit too talkative for a man who\'d just been dented in the crotch.

another update from you = another review from me! Great chapter! Very hot and satisfying. I was so glad to see you had updated when I checked your story! Today is *definately* a good day.

It was such a wonderful gift, checking the sight on a whim before bed and discovering another chapter waiting so soon after I finished the rest. Thank you! This story is wonderful, it sucks me in (no pun intended, honestly) and doesn\'t let go. I love the way you wrote Meilin, and I adore the interaction between her and Syaoran; it\'s perfect. And it was nice to see Ralen finally get treated as he deserves.

I wonder, have you ever read the book Maia, by Richard Adams (author of Watership Down)? The beginning of this story reminded me of that book, although the plots of each story part ways fairly early on. Just curious. I am enjoying this story quite as much, if not more, than that book, which is one I am quite fond of.

I hope your muse keeps you inspired. I\'m currently trying to bribe mine, but she doesn\'t seem as fond of pudding as Kero is.