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Wow, that was fast. Yay, Meilin\'s here! Love the \"Nutcracker\" move, love it, love it, looooove it! Of, course, when Yue does finally find out about the dancing lessons, it could be trouble, but that\'s for later. I have visions of Meilin going for her horse, and the guard start to come check her out, and Li telling them something along the lines of \"This is my cousin, she took combat classes alongside me, and she\'s the only one in the class to actually *beat* the teacher in a full on match!\" As for the Yue and Touya, well, at least the chains are gone, and now Touya knows there are books here! Hmm, only half-way through, you say? Oooh.... @_@; Well, don\'t take too long then. Laters!

Oh, yeah, I almost forgot, a sancutaury?! I always figured he hid himself away in an office and took care of politic-y stuff (\"Hmm, such and such is four weeks behind in their taxes, this law require mild updatung in the wording, another party invitation from Ruby - when will she get the message I\'m not and never will be interested?! - legal scuffle between rich overbearing moron and poor helpless tenant....\") After all, if his castle is the only one near Terriene, doesn\'t that sort of make him the ruler of Terriene? Ah, well...

Awesome! You updated...in less than a month... I\'m so happy that I can\'t get my emotions straight! Thank you for writing such an awesome fic! I really love how the relationships are steadily evolving at its own pace. It\'s not rushed or too slow. The writing itself is also amazing! A work of art! I so love Yue and Touya pairings! Aww, Yue actually called Touya \'Toya\'. You wouldn\'t believe how muchy I felt at that part. Your chapters are so wonderfully long too (well it seems too short by the time I get to the end, but that\'s what happens since I\'m so addicted to the fic). Well, I\'ll stop gushing now. Please update soon!

Heh heh...heh heh...

*faints*

This made my day.

someones gonna die! and his name is ralen. this story evokes a lot of emotions, thanks for the story. okay every story that\'s like all romantic and stuff makes me want to cry but still

Sorry, you made me feel bad for saying you didn\'t describe. I honestly dont know what I was thinking at the time.

This chapter was amazing. Seriously, the part with Touya and Yue in his Sanctuary was oddly beautiful. Poor Yue is falling hard, ne? I also like that you are using Sakura more. I understand how you had her in the first part, then the lead role went to Touya and all that. But she is so pretty in the story. I just want to see her more and more.

The chapters are all really long, which is really good. I watch the scroll bar like a hawk when it gets low, panicking that the chapter is about to end. Maybe that makes me a loser... ah screw it.

I am glad you updated so soon, its neat. Lets hope that Muse continues to kick your ass. You have a good day and all that jazz.

woot! An update! I absolutely love this story!!

Beautifully written. Pity you take so long to finish a chapter.
How long will it be before you post the next chapter? Another four months?
Even so, the story is well written and has a good plot.
I like the way you particularly portray Yue, showing how he slowly yet unknowingly
fall in love with Touya.
Hope you will continue writing.

I AM READY FOR THE SECOND HALF!!!!! lol, but wow... that was great *stares in awe*.. i absolutely love how the characters change too, especially yue.. and to think, he was such a cold bastard a while ago.. meilin was AWESOME! very very funny.. glad to see someone now who has the balls to put up with ralen.. please please keep up w/ the good work!!!!

I just found and finished this tonight; I enjoyed it immensely. I\'m not the best at constructive criticism, so I\'ll just leave you with a plea for more. Please? I\'ll beg if I have to; I do\'t have Touya\'s pride.