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It's perfect. The ending wasn't overly sappy (as some are), but it still brought everything together in a heartfelt way.
If you do end up revamping and publishing this, I will definitely buy a copy.

I love the notes you gave at the end. I think it's important to hear an author's comments on his or her own writing instead of constantly making up completely random interpretations. I hadn't noticed the parallel between Yue's offhanded wish that Touya would jump for him and Touya jumping for him in the end. Really well planned and wonderful.

Thank you.

Wow. This has been one heck of a ride. I'm just- I'm incoherent at best, there's no words. PS was a long, epic, beautiful, awe-ispiring work, and I feel this pang of bittersweet sorrow now that it's finished. Not only that, but your last input in the world of fanfiction. But, since you're moving on to greater things, I wish you the greatest luck and want you to know I'm right behind you all the way! I really hope you do get this published, because you're one of the best writers whose works I've ever had the priviledge to read, fanfiction or no. Just tell us you pen name, so I can buy the first copy! =)

Beautiful epilogue. And beautiful author note. I've been around here reading for a while, and I must say that was a nice and cathartic ending. I feel like nothing was left undone. Everything wrapped up. Smoothly, not too fast, but also didn't linger.

I wish you all the luck in the world on whatever you decide to do with your future. Rock on author. Rock on.

lol I'm gonna get all teary eyed here XD I can't believe it's the end @_@ Three years and 3 or 4 months! yeah I started reading this while I was in highschool and now I'm in college trying to make something of myself. You'll do great in life so you shouldn't be so hard on yourself. :] Don't think about the past think about the now and live for the moments that take your breath away ^_~ A great job on the story and I hope you continue your writing. You should be a journalist ^^ This has to be, no wait, this is the best fanfiction story I have ever read and stuck with. You're an amazing writer and probably an amazing person too (though I don't know anything about you). =] Best of luck in life chica and keep your head held high!

A.B.

Wow. I've read this complete story and (though I really, *really* wanted a SS lemon)... I loved it. ^^
I would've never guessed you were Peacewish! DudE! That's too freaking awesome! (and now I go all teeny on you.. sorry about that!)

Always a fan...
LuBi.
(LyG4ever / BrOkEn.HeArTs at ff.net)

This is finally the end. For the past year and a half, I have followed this story with love and interest and now it's time to say goodbye. I will definitely miss looking for the updates. But I have a feeling that the conversations that we hold in the yahoo group for PS will continue for a long time to some keeping the spirit of the story alive. So farewell PS! I will definitely miss you!!

well what can i say? nothing thats not been said before....
But that was just.. beautiful! i would even go as far as to say i enjoyed it more than harry Potter! (not even Exaggerating there lol) And im actually feeling something like i felt after i put down HP and the deathly hallows! :(
if u get it published heres one person who will defo b buying it! :D
I think i speak for all of us when i say this...
Best fanfic i've ever read!

Wow, it's so strange to see this finally ended. The ending was very intense, and it was a little difficult to picture because there was so much going on when Yue and Touya are "eaten" by the Void. I think the way you put Clow's thoughts into it, though, really helped with spacing out the reasoning behind the Void's defeat and it had a good effect. It's been great following along with the complicated relationships you've made and thank you so much for choosing to write down your dream! :) Good luck with your writing beyond PS and I'm sure I'll be back to read it again!

Capitalist... i have to say that ur the most brilliant writer ever... EVER!!!! To take charecter that we all knew from a story that was meant for children, u twisted them up into a power play plot while still managing to stay tru to their original personalities...that is a work of a genius.U took us on an emotional roller coster with the charecters...when they were terrified so were we, when they were sad we probably cried our eyes out too, when they were happy we gave out a genuine sigh of relief too!!! to get us to feel wat they felt with just words shows wat an amazing writer u are!!!
but the last chapter... even though it was great, it felt as though it was hurried. Plz don't tale this as a flame coz i would never even THINK of doing that to such a great epic story... I'm just saying wat i think. U tied up all ends AND gave it a happy ending, which is brilliant coz we all thought it was gonna b a tragedy.. its just that it doesn't feel complete...
after so many chapters of refusing to even here the word 'love' from either yue or Sakura touya confesses?? n i still don't feel like forgiving Touya for all that he put Sakura n Yue through...he still seems like a git that should be hit on the head..HARD!! n the all scary n crazy void bein defeated like that.... i don't know...
n the feel of the last chap was diff too..... the entire story was like a dark fairy tale slowly unwrapping its deep dark secrets, but the last chap was almost like a movie ending.....sigh.. its either all this or i'm in denial bout the story ending n will try stop the end from commin at any means possible!!!!!!! where will i look for inspiration for pics now!!! don't leave us capitalist!!!plz plz PLZ!!!!!!!!! *puts in irresistable puppy dog eyes*

but i have to ask.... were YOU...capitalist... happy with the way this chapter turned out?

That was the best story ever created. Period. I thank you for writing this and sharing it with the people on this site, it was so beautiful. I love how much emotion is in it. I have tears running down my cheeks now because one, the ending was so nice and I'm really happy for the characters, and two, because it's sad that it is over (except for the epilogue)