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me love dis story
pls pls pls pls update dis again soon
pls!!!!
n i think yue is finally losin his heart 2 touya

This is getting really good. Poor Tori. Hope he and Sakura get out soon or they get together with Yue and Li. I love those pairing. Update soon please.

good! good! and you finally updated! i was just about to give up hope.... i hope that you continue to update, hopefully soon than last time. -.-\'

YUE LOVES TOUYA~~~~~~!!!!!! so sweet ;_; but it was creepy when touya just spazzed out like that o_O thank god for yue, sakura, and li.. please keep up the good work!

You know what you should do?! You should make Yue fall in love with Touya and make Touya go through this angsty phase where he is torn between loving and hating Yue and make Lee fall in love with Sakura and then Ralen tries to have sex with Sakura but Lee kills him! xD Okay, I am getting way too carried away.. >_>\'\'

okay...so I reviewed once...but I got to the end....and wanted more! I understand life gets busy and sometimes, even when there\'s time to write, its hard to because you\'re too drained or just so not in the mood. Happens to me. Never the less, being a fan girl myself, I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!!! I love your story! Yue\'s a little out of character with the sadism....but in this story, I like him this way! Touya\'s really very much like himself, its sooo yummy! Really, I shouldn\'t be squealing over your story....I\'m more mature than that, but.....I can\'t seem to help myself. It makes my own little inner sadist so happy (yes, it scares me to admit I have one). I would love to see Sakura fall in love with Li and/or Tomoyo. I like the way, in your story, that the two siblings\' relationships with their potenial loves have such different flavors. With Yue\'s and Touya\'s relationship, it\'s like a bitter wine mellowing and sweetening over time. With Sakura and Tomoyo/Li, its like a sugar confection melting on your tongue with a burst of tangy citrus in the middle. Also, your villian is so evil! It\'s cliche, but he\'s a villian you love to hate. I hope this doesn\'t spoil the plot line for anyone--if I\'m right--but I would hate to see Yue\'s master come between Yue and Touya permanently. I\'m guessing that Yue\'s master shares Yue\'s bed (as his lover) and is the reason why Yue refuses to share a bed with anyone else. Some kind of confrontation between Yue\'s master and Touya is probably in the works, but I would like to see Yue and Touya together in the end. As a side note, bravo on spelling and grammar. I can\'t say whether your story has no errors, but not once did either of those trip me up while I was reading your story. Either you\'ve done a fine job cleaning up the story, or you have an excellent beta, or both.
Anyways I encourage you (stongly) to keep writting and I will be looking forward to your next update!
:)

This is wonderfully written, I can\'t wait to read what happens next! I love this story so much, but I have to be a little critical. My main concern is the protective relation between Touya and Sakura. In this story, Sakura is 15, if I recall correctly, and is very innocent/naïve in a lot of areas. But she acts more like a 10-year-old and way too innocent for \"very very very sheltered and protected\" by brother. Touya\'s protectiveness is reasonable, with the story, but for that level of protection in their village?
To me, it seems like Sakura has suffered from either a developmental disorder, or some head trama (aka, blow to the head) when she was younger that affected her mental age. Having a younger sister with a disability would cause Touya to become more protective, especially if she is his only remaining family. It explains a lot.
But it\'s just a suggestion. If you want to know more about this sort of stuff, just email me. Otherwise, KEEP FIGHTING TOUYA!!!!

Oh yes, eight chapters and your muse is finally getting to the main part of the story. I am so glad my muse isn\'t the only one. Funny how those quickie porno fics turn into full blown stories. Anyways. Great story. I\'m on chapter eight now and looking forward to reading the rest of what you have posted.
Bravo and all that jazz!

This story was so friggin awesomeley good!! Every time I had to leave the computer, I wanted to read more and more of it!!! By the way, when are you going to write more, and could you just kill that Ralen dude...He\'s annoying..(J/K) Anyway, I really hope you write more soon!!! It was awesome!!!!

Eeeeeekkkk!!! *sqeels with joy* This is soooooo unbelivably good! When I first got the chapter where they told Sakura \"I think Master Yue is going to enjoy you\" I almost stopped reading. I am *not* a Yue/Sakura fan. But I remembered the synop saying it had yaoi in it so I kept reading. Jeeze am I glad I did. \"Nway, tis good wench! Write more soon!