rate_review Reviews

Hey Hey Hey!! love this fic sooooooo much..best i ever read...man i can\'t wait to see hot Touya shows Yue his thanks and i do hope that sometime in the future we learn where Yue went for 3 days and also i can\'t wait to see what happenes between Sakura and Lee..well lz update soon and have fun writing..^-^

ya just gotta write more, ya just gotta

I simply LOVE your fic. I\'ve been looking for a pairing like this for a while now. And so far, yours is the best (and the only one) that I\'ve found. Not that I\'ve been looking hard enough, but still... I love how you portrayed Touya here. You made him submissive while not taking away his \"manliness\". However, I feel like your work lacks more description. You might want to try emphasizing some things. Like in the seen between Touya and Aya after he was taken, you might want to actually try describing to the readers what exactly his expression looked like. Also, with the bedroom scenes, perhaps you could try making it more stimulating? I\'m not saying it\'s boring or anything. I like how you presented it. At least your work is a far cry from most of the others I\'ve seen...
Of course, these are all just suggestions. I hope you don\'t take offense to anything I\'ve said. I\'ve been told I\'m too blunt and too much of a critique.
Hope you finish your story soon! I eagerly await for your next update.

umm oops..my bad i put add.net when what i really meant to write was AFF.NET..^-^..sr about that Ra-kun..mistypes that..the \'d\' is so close to the \'f\' that i made a mistake..anyway..plz update soon..^.^

Hey loved the last chap. and all the other..i can\'t wait until u write the next one...oh plz write more soon..if this is not enough prase i will try harder..just let me know..^-^

This is interesting. I dont normally come to this site (i stick to the less risque ff.n, lol) ill have to remeber to check back often, make sure you update!!

I love this fic sooo much and know that it is the best out of all the CCS fics on ADD.net..i just can\'t wait until the next chap and really hope that update soon..^__^

EEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
WRITE MORE SOON!

YEHA! Gimme some Sakura/Siyoran ACTION!
Q. Whare is Kero? And Ruby Moon? She\'s kewl!
KILL BLONDY! DON\'T LET HIM TOUCH SAKURA!
Turn Yue into a goodguy, evil isn\'t becoming of him.
& to any who knows whats ADD.net?

U RULE!

I forgot to ask about Erol!
whare\'s he? is that whare Yue went?
so meny questions! hope thare anserd SOON!