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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i do love this fic, it\'s always a pleasure to read, it\'s so worth the wait,
great chapter, you can see the relationship between the characters developing and touyas mind working, it\'s very curious how yue treated other slaves and not touya, you can see how yue is infatuated with his new toy.
and the part with ralen going into the bathroom is just priceless
love it
chekiita
great chapter, you can see the relationship between the characters developing and touyas mind working, it\'s very curious how yue treated other slaves and not touya, you can see how yue is infatuated with his new toy.
and the part with ralen going into the bathroom is just priceless
love it
chekiita
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are seriously a very...very...very wrong person...
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey i really love ur fic soo much..in the begining i thought that it was good but as i neared the last update that u did i was really happy that it seemed to get even better..I really can\'t wait to findout what happenes and to see what that thing was Touya felt when..umm.they were..*blush* anyway i can\'t wait to read more about what Sakura does with Li and also how Yue feels about her brother..well plz update soon..oh and don\'t forget to have fun writing..^.^
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely in love with this story! You have a beautiful writing style and your whole story is creative and interesting. Much <3 to you for writing this awsome fic! I look forward to reading more in the future. ^_^
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooo!!! You stopped so soon! Please! More!! *fangirl squee*
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya! I have read this fic like three times now! I absolutely love it! I told my self that I would review every chapter some day, but (and I hope you forgive me) I decided to just review this chapter for now. I probably would go through every chapter individually and review each of them, but time is not on my side and I am just lucky to be able to review this one.
I frequently check to see if you have updated this story, for I really love it, and was ecstatic to come on a couple of weeks ago and find that there were new chapters up. My sister looked at me strangely when I started screaming out in glee. ^_^ Oh well.
My favorite parts are the Touya/Yue parts, for I am a huge yaoi fan, and my love for Touya and Yue are just as strong as my love for yaoi. I started reading this a loooong time ago and was wonderfully surprised at how hooked I was on it. I love the characters, the plot, the brother/sister relationships. The way you portrayed Touya is just breath-taking. Especially since Touya went all over the country just to find and free his sister. Even when mostly everyone was saying that it was a lost cause.
And Yue is just so mysterious and wonderfully written. He\'s powerfully adept at everything, and yet you still subtlly show his weaknesses. I think that it\'s important to show that not everyone is perfect. And you do that with exceptional ease.
One of my favorite parts of the whole fic was when Touya got sick and Yue was actually concerned and made him eat. I don\'t know, maybe I am just weird (and that\'s quite probable) but I just adored that part.
I also love the way you have the subtle hints of the start of feelings for your characters. Most authors/authoresses just jump right in and have their characters proclaiming their love for eachother, even though they hated eachother just a few paragraphs ago. I love how everything is developing in a nice and easy to follow and very believeable pace.
Well, um, I hope that you are not annoyed with me for writing such a ridiculously long review (sorry, couldn\'t help myself, as I said, I absolutely adore this fic). I was wondering if you would e-mail me whenever you update this fic? I know that it might be annoying to do so, but if you wouldn\'t mind, I would really love to get an email whenever you post a new chapter. I don\'t have an account of adultff.net, and I don\'t go on here often. The only time I really do is so that I can see if you updated.
So, if it wouldn\'t be too much trouble, would you e-mail me? ^_^ Thanks for writing an awesomely wonderful fic. Can\'t wait to hear from you, or to see a new update!
~~LuV~~
I frequently check to see if you have updated this story, for I really love it, and was ecstatic to come on a couple of weeks ago and find that there were new chapters up. My sister looked at me strangely when I started screaming out in glee. ^_^ Oh well.
My favorite parts are the Touya/Yue parts, for I am a huge yaoi fan, and my love for Touya and Yue are just as strong as my love for yaoi. I started reading this a loooong time ago and was wonderfully surprised at how hooked I was on it. I love the characters, the plot, the brother/sister relationships. The way you portrayed Touya is just breath-taking. Especially since Touya went all over the country just to find and free his sister. Even when mostly everyone was saying that it was a lost cause.
And Yue is just so mysterious and wonderfully written. He\'s powerfully adept at everything, and yet you still subtlly show his weaknesses. I think that it\'s important to show that not everyone is perfect. And you do that with exceptional ease.
One of my favorite parts of the whole fic was when Touya got sick and Yue was actually concerned and made him eat. I don\'t know, maybe I am just weird (and that\'s quite probable) but I just adored that part.
I also love the way you have the subtle hints of the start of feelings for your characters. Most authors/authoresses just jump right in and have their characters proclaiming their love for eachother, even though they hated eachother just a few paragraphs ago. I love how everything is developing in a nice and easy to follow and very believeable pace.
Well, um, I hope that you are not annoyed with me for writing such a ridiculously long review (sorry, couldn\'t help myself, as I said, I absolutely adore this fic). I was wondering if you would e-mail me whenever you update this fic? I know that it might be annoying to do so, but if you wouldn\'t mind, I would really love to get an email whenever you post a new chapter. I don\'t have an account of adultff.net, and I don\'t go on here often. The only time I really do is so that I can see if you updated.
So, if it wouldn\'t be too much trouble, would you e-mail me? ^_^ Thanks for writing an awesomely wonderful fic. Can\'t wait to hear from you, or to see a new update!
~~LuV~~
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot!!! another chapter. ^__^ i really love this fic. your characterization is wonderful. although in this chapter i was missing Li. i love that kid. but lots of Touya and Yue goodness is never a bad thing. hehe. rock on!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One thing for another. Nice chap. ^.^ smut! and a little bit of fluffiness! heheheheh great chapter! Please update when you can!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Please update soon.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i found this story by accident and it was a pleasant surprise. i look forward to updates.