rate_review Reviews

My my, an update! I\'m delighted! I do hope you will continue and mind you, I hope you know a lot of people are likely reading this, just not reviewing~ I stumbled upon your story somehow and what can I say, I fell in love with it. You have a magnificent talent for writing and plotting out characterization. They have minds, they have pasts, they have emotions, they\'re people. The passion of this story is just wonderfully paced and evenly spread. It\'s a beautiful piece of work. It would be a shame if you didn\'t continue because you think there\'s lack of readers! I hope you continue to tell us more of this tale!


Looking forward to more,

Eru

Ack, this rocks! It\'s got a plot--which is rare in the world of AFF.net! I really, really, really love this story. Please update as soon as you can! :D

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!

A very well written story there... I understand you life being busy and all that but please do continue and Take your time in this. ^^

-Fria-

I really do hope you continue this. It\'s
been in my favorites for so long and in
the end I decided to finish reading it. I
regret not bothering until now.

I just finished what you\'ve written so far... I should say that I\'m not used to reading so much prolonged angst in one sitting. I know that they\'ll get together eventually but... >___> I kind of feel sorry for Touya. He\'s been suffering rape for several chapters now and although it seems like it\'ll let up soon, it makes me wonder how you\'ll go about this relationship. It\'ll be tricky to reverse how Touya feels about Yue, and as much as Touya responds to Yue\'s touch, to turn subserviance to passion isn\'t an easy task. Since you\'ve gone this far, I trust you already know? I\'ll be watching, and hopefully neither of us will be disappointed. ^^

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more! This story is amazing! You have a very poignant writing style that makes the reader understand anything that a certain character is going through, even if he or she hasn\'t ever been put into any kind of situtation. Your character development makes me tingle with every chapter i read, and i can\'t wait to see what else you\'re going to have happen! I can\'t wait for the next chapter :3.

\"Wasn’t it worth the price of a collar around her neck?\"

I really loved how you meant that. You did capture the essence of the themes you wanted to explore... and I commend you for that. The discussion of sex slavery, it\'s one that many fics come short of fully expressing.

good chapter! i know what you mean when you talk about getting writers\' block and moving around alot. i just hope that you can update again soon!

The first thing I\'ll say is \"wow\"

this is by far the best Card Captor Sakura fan fic I\'ve ever read.

v.v I\'ve got nothing bad to say about it at all.

:3 but I believe you should continue down the road you are

>.> Touya\'s gunna break I just know eet