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Hello, I'm reviewing again for this chapter since I don't think my other review was proper (actually, nowhere even close).

Anyway, thank you very much, Capitalist-san for writing such a long and wonderful fic. This truly was an amazing story, and I'm looking forward to the epilogue. But I thought the ending would be a little more tragic - I like them that way. - and I was kinda surprised I didn't burst into tears at the end. But my eyes were watering when Yue let Touya go, and I don't know which chapter that was, since it all became a blur (probably too much MO~E.) I was super giddy at the ending and I couldn't even speak properly for a full minute after reading the "THE END". I couldn't really believe "Pleasure Slave" was over.

I'm very happy for Syaoran-kun. He got his girl. And, it really took a long time (2 years for us.) for him to get Sakura-chan. All of the characters really developed ('cept Ralen, of course), and I really got pulled into the plot. I'm not really the type to think about what's logically gonna happen next, and I just anticipate the coming chapter.

THANK YOU VERY MUCH AGAIN FOR WRITING SUCH A LONG STORY! It was one of the few reasons I kept checking back in Aff!

I think this is long enough. I really should've reviewed for each chapter. Very sorry.

-Cherry

well fuck..... it made me almost cry. im so glad its over. happily ever after indeed. don't ever do anything to us like that again, please? angsty, definelty. wonderful story though. it had everything. perfect! i remember reading it about a year or so ago actually. i had pages of it printed out in my room so i could read it on the train whenever u posted a new chapter and i didnt have the time to read it. ahhhh lol. congratulations on finally finishing it though. i bet you're proud, and you should be. it's a awesome achievement.

I really love the ending yet I hate seeing the complete fini of a story! Its going to leave me off empty for a while. Your story was truly one of a kind, and so along with your imagination. I haven't read a single story that kept me reading for this long and at the tip of the cliff the whole while. Please, take care, and produce a happy future like the ending of this story for yourself.

Now what are we suppose to do with our lives now?

My goodness that was so deep and @_@ I was hyperventalating from the suspense. =) another awesome chapter ^_~

I turned to this site because my normal fanfiction site was acting up. I do not know if your creations are "true" to character as I am not an anime fan, but I do know your story was very beautiful. I also believe that your story is considerably better than most that I read on any website. Have you considered trying this for real and becoming published?
This story got me genuinely involved and I read it through the night (not easy with four children and a full time job as a teacher!) but I just could not put it down.
I look forward to the epilogue.

neat fic!

I finally get around to finishing this, after delaying so long. I do that with stories I really like, don't want to end it all.

But Oh. My. God. In Confessions, I was crying. Wow. Now I'm trying to figure out the epilogue. Sakura and Li get married, obviously. However, that doesn't necessarily mean that Sakura has to break all ties to Touya. **rubs hands** or maybe they all move into the castle... Castle full of crazy Li's; sounds like fun!

Anyways, this is awesome, one of my favorite fanfics. Gonna read it over, and over, and over.

Absolutely wonderful!!i couldn't help it!...i cried!! this chapter was the pretty much the end and i was soo sad!!:(

For i moment there i thought you killed touya and yue!! but i kept on reading, and i loved the way you took away his and kero's immortality. At long last they'ss be happily ever after. i mean if he still had his immortality then their love would just end up in tradgedy agian. Another Clow for yue.

i must say that i am really impressed with the progress touya showed throughout the whole fic. I was proud of the way he threw himself off the cliff to save yue. he and yue were the characters that showed the most change, and i was really proud of both of them.i was especially proud when touya finally let sakura go.

i was raelly happy to see li and sakura together agian...even tho they were apart for like 3 hours, probably even less. but i was really touched by her speech/ lecture she gave her brother. i really liked the fact that she was able to break free from her brother. \she understands so much now then she did in the bigging of the story. i really hope that she'll go back to touya at least to see him once in a while.

And Syoaran... FINALLY has sakura all to himself!!it really about time!!take that ralen!i's nice to see then together again after their heart wrenching goodbye last chapter. i really cried when they say goodbye and i cried when they got together again! im a really complicated girl! His speech to yue really talked some sense into him and proved how much he progressed as a character. i have to say that his and sakura's love is alot more pure, white, and fluffier then yue's and touya's. throughout the whole fic sakura remained innocent(kinda)and pure never really hating li at all. While yue's and touya's love was, at the beginning, was so hateful and full of revenge. And i like the way that yue Acknowledges this in the last chapter. i really wasn't expecting the void to die though. i htought that we would come and except the fact that clow loved yue more or that yue and kero would maybe ease his pain. cause i kinda felt that he had a grudge for not being wanted. wats up with that?

in conclusion... i hate the fact that the story has come to an end, but im but the ending made me feel all warm and fuzzy. I really must congratulate you on a brilliant story and a job well done! Most authoers wouldn't stick to a story for so long! it really encouraged me to go back to old stories and finish them so thats what im gonna do. It's a work in progress though so i need time!But i really want to encourage you to write another fic. PLEASE DO SO!! and take your time on it... your fans can wait! i mean we waited 3 years for this one!!lol ;)

*silvergirlrox*

ps WRITE ANOTHER FIC. THIINK ABOUT IT!!!!!PLEASE???!!

wow....cant believe that the fic is almost at its end....

i really enjoyed reading this fic....best CCS fic that i have
ever read and it will be missed....though time to time i will
read it all over again and over again....

i hope that you will write another fiction...cause i really love
your writing<3