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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person Luna Tiger (# 2777)
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We were definitely getting worried, I\'ll give you that, but this story\'s too good to be thought of so trivially as \'author\'s not updating anymore *abandon*\'. Heck no, you still have plenty of loyal readers. ^_^

And yay! All\'s right with the world! ..Almost. Ralen needs to die. By Touya. Yes. Ralen needs to suffer horribly and terribly, then keel over dedd0rz.
person inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in)
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY God!!! YOU\"RE BACK> i am so so so happy. I thought this fic was gonna go unfinished *sniffle*. But i checked out this site regularly for update and today i enter and there you are with a new chapter. A GREAT BIG BEAR HUG.

oh dear yue has feeling for touya. that\'s so good. i hope touya finds it in hi heart to forgive yue at last and they live a big happy family witg li and sakura and HANG RALEN UPSIDE DOWN ON A TREE NAKED!! AND FLOG HIM TEN..NO..HUNDRED TIMEA A DAY, BLOODY CRIPPLED OLD BASTARD. anyway great chapter, it\'s good to know that yue is a big softy under all the hard shell. he cares so much that he told touya that the flowers were for him. That\'s totally adorable. i love your fic. and you are a great writer. just don\'t take so long to update okay? PWWWEEEEEAAASEEE!!!!
person Blackrose
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good. Hope Sakura and Li get together soon and Yue snaps out of being a prick. Hope he an Tori are happy together. Looking forward to reading more. Please get that jerk Ralen outta the picture and bring Madison back.
person Scorpinac
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yell? Does this count? - YAY!! You\'re alive, you\'re alive, you\'re alive!!! I was honestly a little worried there! Okay, the story - Ralen\'s still a bastard and I now have visions of Yue using his powers to torch him alive when he finds out how the SOB\'s been overstepping his bounds; Sakura and Touya are finally reconciled, huzzah!; Sakura is finally allowed out of the damned cage, double huzzah!; and she now even has a chance to build a relationship with Syaoran! Triple huzzah!! All things considered, it can only get better from here! So get the next one rolling! (And as for funerals, I\'m actually looking to attend one in the relatively near future, myself....:-()
person Scorpinac
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To lili -
If that had been the case, Touya would have most likely instantly killed the bastard, either by strangling him, beating him to death, grabbing a knife and slashing his throat, or more simply ramming it *into* said throat, or tossing him off the Tea room balcony head first(they are on the 3rd floor last I checked! Heheheh... (EG!))! Just saying.
person lili
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought a real-life accident had happened, honestly, but I think my heart almost beat out of its chest when I saw the story first on the page again and not be one of those weird glitches AFF has. Oh my god.

Anyway, I\'m looking forward to how Touya will react to Yue after he made him go see her, and if Sakura tells him anything. And actually, when Touya walked into the tea room I thought for a moment that Sakura was fully naked and with Ralen. I think Touya would\'ve gotten a heart attack. Hope you have time to write more soon!

-lili
person Korinna
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story! I just finished reading through all 16 chapters, took me a couple days though. But I really like it so far! Will you be updating it soon I hope?
person Scorpinac
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Begins groveling like a pathetic loser!) Please, oh please, great Capatalist! Say you have not forsaken us! Pleas, please, pleas give us another update. We\'ll even take a little one! honest! (Proceeds to run into darkest available corner and hides in shame...)
person AFicR
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... what happened??!

Why there are no updates?? ~_~

I want an UPDATE!! *whines*

Pleeeeeaaaaase?! !!_!!
person Outlaw Angel
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I reallly do like your story......It\'s verry angsty......but what ever I like it alot....Please update soon I wanna know what will happen to Touya and Sakura....Willl Touya fll in love with Yue???....And what about Sakura???.....Will Shaoron have her????.....Please update as soon as possible

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