rate_review Reviews

I can forgive you for killing off Sonomi, but only because I agree with your reason. She’s to emotional to let anyone suffer who she feels doesn’t deserve it.
Brilliant, by the way. I don’t understand why people don’t make Touya the uke more often. Sure he\'s over protective and serious, but in the manga he’s always shy. I mean really shy. Yukito is always very much in charge of there relationship. Touya is also very quiet, Despite talking frequently consistently to Sakura.

I\'m amazed at how in character you’ve kept them all. I think Sakura is coming off a little wimpy, but it was fun to see her beat up on Touya. I guess it must be hard because while Sakura is strong she’s actively non-violent and naturally unspiteful. I think if she does see Yue again it would nice to see her get really angry at him. Can you have her say something really nasty to him? Only one comment, but now that she’s forgiven her brother all that anger has got to go somewhere.

Someone made the comment that she should go black collar eventually. I\'d personally love to see that little bomb go off. Especially say, with a certain guard captain, willingly.
Amusing thoughts come of Sakura getting cross when Touya tries to kill him, Ralin, Yue and everyone in general.


Cant say much more, where is the rest of your writing? you write good.
Go go, kiddo

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!! I want to know what happens to Touya! Please?

I\'ve finally finished your story and now I\'m awaiting a new chapter to come up. So far it\'s great. You have wonderful vocabulary and your story flows! I wish I had vocabulary such as yours, you see, because my vocabulary is very limited. But hey, I can always read more books and listen in English Class. Um, I\'ll stop with my personal life. Well, I just reviewed you to congratulate you for such a story. Although, I\'m not too interested in Yaoi, BUT, that was before I read your story. Now I\'m completely crazed for it! Update soon. Oh anyway, is there going to be M/F in here? =)

WHEN?????? PLEASE!!!!

Touya as submissive. I keep looking but there so hard to find, and when I do find one its usualy badly written crud. needless to say, when I found this one I stayed up all night to get up to date. This is the best thing iv\'e found on this site do date. Thank you for writng it.

Just more writer\'s block, I hope? Capitalist *is* still with us, right? He/she didn;t go and die on us, did they? Cause I *really* wann see the next chap.! This suspense is torture....

Haven\'t reviewed in awhile, but it\'s still very interesting and like Scorpiniac, I\'m eager to see how the reconciliation goes. Hope writer\'s block or computer problems aren\'t hurting too bad; been checking up everyday to see how it\'s going. Hope to see the fic at the top of the page soon!

-lili

I absolutely adore this story--it\'s beautifully written and quite intense. I\'m always checking it for updates and am so excited when you do! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!

If Magnificence was to take words for beauty then this MASTERPIECE was to be a selection in immediate picking. The EMOTIONS, THE FURY, THE RAGE, THE COMPASSION (Tomoya\'s part illuminated) was much to be appreciated!!!! THE coldness of Yue exceeds yet melts slightly without doubt the revelation to cruelty will have reflections!!!! I sure enjoyed the remnants of Sakura\'s innocence feeling not stain\'s hardness, will Li be involved in the blossoming of romance, my apologies in strong if I neglected notices of anything mentioning the inquisition in prior. Yet I marvel still at how the pieces are well in fit!!!! YOU ARE WRITER VINTAGE IN FULLEST!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!

this is wonderfull!!!! please keep updating I love your story^_^ *kisses*