rate_review Reviews

I don\'t think I can properly express how much I enjoy this story... n_n It\'s rare to find really, REALLY good writing in just about any fanfiction, but you, my dear, have not only taken the cake, you\'ve run off and scarfed it down. I\'m totally engrossed in your plot so far, and look forward to reading more of your work. Congratulations, and keep up the excellent work!

Hey!! This has been a really good read and I hope you keep writing! I do admit that if I ever got my hands on Yue in this fic I\'d see how he\'d like it with the roles reversed.
Please give some form of a heart, I can\'t stand to see how he treats Touya so callously, like an object. Otherwise I\'ll start ranting how pointless your story is and demonizing it every other minute (JUST KIDDING!! LOL!!!). Anyways, make ups all happy and put up a new chap soon!

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....i stumbles upon this fic and DAMNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....
i freakin LOVE IT!!!!!...an UKE TOUYA!!!!!!@_@....WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR!!!!!
DAMN!!!!!!.....i am sooo loving this YuexTouya thing going on...and that is what
i am reading this for ^______^.....man all that Touya ANgst......^____^.....

i dont care what other people say please keep writing YuexTouya....

i WANT MORE!!!!T____T....i was gonna cry cause it the chapter ended....UPDATE!!!T___T

This is a good story! But please! I want some m/f action...like Syaoran and Sakura! Please! BTW, this is such a beautifully written story! Please continue!

well, I\'m pleased at the latest pieces of work. a little late, but entertaining nonetheless

Whoo, two chapters. Before I forget, I wanted to ask you if you\'re planning on doing anything about Sakura\'s birthday? You made kind of an issue out of it waaaay back in chapter one, and then no more. Surely Sakura has had that to think about while she\'s been chillin\' in her cage?
This chapter, coupled with 16 (which I\'ll review on its own) is a powerpunch, but on its own it is kinda short--even if it\'s twice the length of my average chapter. I was quite impressed with Sakura\'s confrontational skills. It was like, bam, take that! I\'m hoping this means she\'ll crawl a little out of her naieve shell of oblivion. I know you\'ve gotten compliments on your interpretation of Sakura here, but, of all your renditions, this is my least favorite. I\'m hoping she\'ll prove herself smart in the long run.
At this point, contact with Syaoran seems so impossibly lost. But I\'m sure you have something up your sleeve besides a sexual fetish.

In conclusion, thank you for no Yaoi. *stands alone, kinda like the cheese in that song*

omg ur story sux.. (Is that getting old yet?) I\'m done. Really. I feel better now.

\"That\'s pretty much it, if you\'re in it for the yuri.\" MY ASS. This chapter made me very happy, and really, only you would have come up with such a scenario. I knew Ralen was a little sicko, but who knew Tomoyo would match wits? It\'s hard to say who really won, though.

It was nice to see Sakura have some human contact. And I\'m glad she understands her brother a little bit more. Their relationship up to this point has lacked any real depth; it\'s just been \"I love you\" and \"I love you, too\" and comfort and bunnies and secret dirty things. But now it\'s like something finally opened up in Sakura\'s head and she\'s realizing that there\'s an adult world out there. I\'d like to say I\'m looking forward to seeing Sakura talk to her brother with her newfound revelation, but I have a feeling you\'re going to prevent that from happening so easily.

In all sincerity, though, never stop writing. You\'re one of the few good authors out there, and you\'re the only one who knows how to make Li kick ass in just such a way that makes you feel guilty for liking it. Your stories are also the only ones I don\'t just skim, I read every word. Especially the Yuri words. More plz, kthx.

well.... it\'s nice to see Tomoyo being so kick-assish.... but.... wow... Ralen is such a pervert.... o_O... i would so tell you to let him die and rot in hell, but if he did, then there would be no conflict on Sakura\'s part.... bah humbug....hmm... don\'t know if it\'s just me or not, but Ch. 15 didn\'t seem as ... captivating as your story has been so far.. it sounded rushed, but please keep up the good work ^_^ and update soon! your story is just toooo addicting

Ooh, a twofer! Works for me! And yes, that is quite satisfactory, my dear. Just glad Ralen didn\'t \"jump in\" to join the fun more throroughly. And it really was just a matter of time until Sakura learned the truth, wasn\'t it? All godd things, etc. Now, if she could just find a way to escape the cage, or at least get some books to read while in there. And as to the back story, makes sense to me. And you\'re absolutely right, Sonomi Daidoji practically dotes on Tomoyo when she has the time in the normal universe, no WAY she\'d just stand by and let her little girl get sold into slavery, no matter how bad the financial situation. And from the sounds of it, that family\'s, or at least Tomoyo\'s father is, probably in something akin to \"Debtor\'s\" Prison(they used to have those establishments back in the 1800\'s, and maybe the early 1900\'s, too. It\'s my understanding that Charles Dickens\'s family spent some time in one whilst he grew up elsewhere on the outside[course, that may have bee fanciful story telling, but who knows.].). Well, try not to take too long on 17, ya\'hear?! We wanna see the reconciliation! Toodles!

OMG!!!!! XD YOU UPDATED!!!!!2 CHAPTERS!!!! i\'m sooo excited