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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person MILHARU
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I LOVE IT!!!!!!! PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!
person Somnam.
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To quote the kid on Jerry Mcguire *gasp* You said fuck.

I know I shouldn\'t be surprised with anything I find here, but still I had to do a double-take. I mean, it\'s you. And you just said fuck. Anyway, I guess this is the part where I become the asshole in the audience who throws popcorn and says \"Bring Sakura back!\" or, for fun, \"show me your boobs!\" But I really don\'t have anything intelligent to say, so I\'ll spare you.

Are you feeling better? I was going to e-mail you and see, but I was afraid I\'d start ranting again. You\'re right about my writing. I am flowery and predictable. You just have no idea the personal self-inflicted torment I give myself over NOT being that way, and I am. Digression. Sorry.

\"Show me your boobs!\"
person Scorpinac
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Drag? No...well, maybe a little. Just that last chapter or two. But just so long as we\'re *finally* getting back to Sakura\'s end a little more, she\'s gotta be, as she said, half bonkers from boredom now! And, of course, I still await Ralen\'s vanquishing. Update soon as you can!
person jaz
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome!! please keep updating this fic is like a book very enjoyable!!!^^;
person ayachan
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! UPDATION!!!!! ok, haven\'t avtually read the chapter yet... -_-, but i\'ve been waiting all week for this
person ayachan
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O omg.....

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wow

ok, wow, in shock right now, the ending was... unexpected for me... i really didn\'t think that Yue would do that... i mean, he knows that Touya was suffering and such.... sigh, well, when i think about it now i really shouldn\'t have been surprised, but, but... i was hoping for a bit of compassion on Yue\'s part... man... if i was Touya i would just totally kill myself... but then again, he does have to take care of Sakura.....

ok, yeah, now i\'m rambling and stating the obvious -_-

lol, from what the author said, then i\'m gonna say that lili had the right idea all along ^_^

ok, ganbatte on the the third part, and we will all be waiting to see what happens ^_^
person ayachan
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, yes, that\'s what it all boils down to isn\'t it? gender.... for girls, it\'s yaoi, for guys, it\'s hentai... and maybe even yuri (?)....
person ayachan
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
rofl, yeah, well aren\'t we all? anyway, i\'m sure we can stop all this debate once the author posts up the next chapter... until then, ganbatte, capitalist!
person Scorpinac
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, hell yeah. Yuri\'s fine by me! Like I said, so long as at least one hot babe is involved, I\'m there. Subtract the babe, and my attention wanders off into the void. And yes, I\'m a tad shallow.
person Scorpinac
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ayachan -
No, I don\'t think it\'s just you. Though it could be all of us...

Lili - <>
I think that much is certain.

And as to indulging the Yaoi lovers, I\'m not saying the author shouldn\'t. If that is what the author wants to write, then pray, do so. I\'m just saying it\'s not doing anything for me. It\'s not grossing me out(though it is starting to push in that direction, marginally.), it just doesn\'t *do* anything for me, as I am a well established hetero male. Now, sandwich a hot girl into that, and I\'m all for it!

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