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Umm, How did I get the Italics?

And that second line should look more like:
Lili - ((I have a feeling she\'s already planned out most of the storyline already.))
I think that much is certain.

sorry, i know it\'s not the place to do this... but hi everyone ^_^ i am ... ayachan... obviously... lol *bows* Hajimemashite

wow, lili, i was gonna say that too ^_^... i\'m sorry to say that i am like.. a radid yaoi fangirl... ok, i\'m not that bad >< ... and so, well, personally, the whole Yue X touya thing doesn\'t bug me too much... and yeah, i was just thinking that this is capitalist\'s fanfic anyway, so the author prolly has some idea of what to write next

and i do agree with Scorpinac.... please don\'t let Ralen do anything freaky w/ Sakura.... i completely had a nervous breakdown in ch. 12 when Ralen decided to stay w/ Sakura anyway... and he kept getting closer and closer... O_O... i think it would be cool if Ralen did something to Sakura so that Touya and/or Yue could beat the living crap out of him... but then i\'d be in total agony over Sakura\'s physical and mental condition o_O

but please keep up the good work ^_^

lol, random, but isn\'t like... in a weird way sorta complimenting the author? cuz we\'re getting so into the story to argue what should happen next?... or is it just me and my stupid self?

I have to disagree raptly with Ayachan. I think you\'ve focused a little too much on YuexTouya, and it\'s *really* time to get back to Sakura\'s side of the story. Not to be a grouch or anything, but the yaoi just don\'t do a thing for me, and I was really looking forward to the F/M hentai of the story(preferrably Sakura w/Syaoran and *not* Ralen, who I verdantly hope gets his permanent walking papers relatively soon[like, say, within the next three or four chapters?]).

Gawd, we\'re so anticipatory we\'re having a feud in the reviews. XD

ayachan, I think that uke Yue would be kind of a twist, and that the way he\'s been acting and such has to do with Clow...but I\'m just inferring, like we all are. We\'d get into Yue\'s depth of character that way.

And Scorpiniac, can\'t the yaoi fans be indulged a bit? To tell the truth, the yuri kind of grossed me out, but to each one\'s own...and I\'m sure the het is coming soon, although how Sakura is going to get out of that cage will be a sure plot twist.

But it\'s all up to the author; I have a feeling she\'s already planned out most of the storyline already.

-lili

lol, as sad as this sounds... i\'m get on the internet everyday just to see if you have updated yet... this is a great story... but ano... i just realized that Tomoyo hasn\'t appeared in a while... well, duh,.. but would you mind letting Tomoyo visit Sakura sometime whenever you decide to shift the focus back to Sakura again? Anyway, i\'m really glad that you wrote this story... i mean, it\'s not everyday that you see Touya being dominated, and it makes me happy... don\'t get me wrong.. i think Touya X Yukito is an adorable couple... but Touya being the seme in practically every story just gets pretty old after a while... well, to me that would have been a short while.. ok, rambling, but anyway, i\'ll be waiting to see what happens to Touya next! ^_^ ganbatte ne!

ok, sorry, just read some of the reviews... and please don\'t let Yue have any connection with Clow... sorry, ms. lili... but i guess i\'ll just assume that Clow will be seme... and the thought of Yue being seme when he was originally a uke... just doesn\'t settle with me too well... and i totally agree with ms. miyu... more yue x touya onegai... i love Sakura and all, but i love touya more... or more like i love the yaoi more o_O, lol, and please don\'t add in Yukito, i think it\'ll mess it up.... ok, so basically please keep it as it is....... -_______________- dude, i feel bossy... gomen ne.. >.>

wwwah!!! I love this fic!!! its absolutely fantastic ^_^! keep going please!!

OKKKKK.....I\'M CONFUSED...USUALLY SYAORAN WOULD HAVE DONE SOMETHING FOR SAKURA RIGHT NOW!!!! IS ITME OR ARE YOU A LITTLE INTO THE WHOLE YUE AND TOUYA THING*throws up* No offense but I prefer touya and yukito then bastered (although really sexy with great eyes that make you want t- ahem continuing) Yue. PLEASE SOMEONE SAVE SAKURA BEFORE ITS TO LATE SYAORAN LI WHERE THE HELL ARE YA!!!! Great story i get a little worked up over fanfics^^\'\'

The past five chapters in a nutshell:

\"Naughty slave. I shall have to train you.\"

\"I\'m nobody\'s slave.\"

\"I like \'em feisty. Open your mouth, boy.\"

\"...damn it\"

Sakura: *swinging in her cage, waiting for something to happen*

great lemony chapter. yahoo! i loved it. hope u put up more lemon between yue and touya. plz plz plz update soon