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wah~ i love this story.. and well, to me, ... please Sakura end up with Li or Tomoyo.... or someone other than that nasty old perverted man... i\'m scared for Sakura o_O

O_O NOOOO!!!! NOT A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! Please keep up the good work ^_^

That...could have gone better. Now, if we can return our concentration to Sakura\'s side of the story? Yes, please, pretty please, thank you.

Heh...I want to know how Touya deals with this. xD

Anyways, a little abrupt with how you change POV between Yue and Touya, but I think Yue\'s character was defined pretty well here. And I\'ve been meaning to say this forever, but I suspect there\'s something going on behind Yue\'s character with Clow (I\'ve wanted to say that since Yue was all \"I share my bed with no one\" but...) and I\'m interested to know if or what\'s going on with that. Thanks for the update!

...And give us more soon. :DD

-lili

I actually pinched myself after I finished reading, just to be sure I wasn\'t dreaming that I was reading, Finally, a well-written and awesome fic. The fact that it had yuri, yoai and was au...well that was a bonus. I hope you come out with the next chapter soon. If it was up to me, I would make it a crime if you didn\'t finish this fic. Thanks for the enjoyable reading.

i like it! you keep all the characters in character (if that makes any sense) and yet have an unique and interesting fic all your own. like i said, i like it and can\'t wait to read the next chapter. please up date soon!

Yes, we do seem to be working on Touya V. Yue for the most point at present, aren\'t we? So the appearance of Meilin may be coming anytime now? And I do hope an end, preferrably painful, to Ralen is in the works either soon or at the very least down the line. Well, I\'ll be waiting!

I really like this story. I think your writing is excellen,. I feel Yukito is missing. You should insert him somehow like beauty & the beast style or as Yue\'s vessel or maybe his half-brother. If you do this I would love forever and maybe give you my first born child.

Aya.. I like that. Any relation to Ayashi no Ceres or Parasite Eve?

Well, I woke up after a nightmare at 4 am, and decided to give this a read after checking my e-mail from you. It was actually a nice break to have a less sexual chapter (now how often will you hear me say that?) Yes, I\'m harassing you shamelessly about Sakura, but it\'s a new thing for you to give her so much less spotlight in one of your stories, so I\'m just going to give in and encourage the effort. Besides, I trust you. It\'s starting to get more interesting to know what Touya is gaining \"privledges.\" I\'m wondering if he\'ll play the logic card and submit while wanting something better, or do the Touya thing and think that first idea sucks.

I was so happy when I saw that this was first on the list again I spat out a mouthful of iced tea at my monitor. Anyway, the dinner with Sakura in this chapter was sort of skimped through, but I was kind of hoping for that because my attention right now is really all on what\'s between Touya and Yue. XD

Anyway, during the wait I began to seriously think about what was going to happen in the story... Like if Yukito would show up. I was really kind of hoping Yuki would show up and there would be a Touya/Yukito thing, but that would sort of skew things off-kilter now (especially with how Yuki is supposed to be Yue), and it looks like there really could be something between Yue and Touya. ;) This chapter had a lot with the emphasis on how they\'re getting along, and I think the character development was done pretty well.

As for Sakura...I can\'t wait to see how you do her.

-lili

(...no pun intended.)