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Well, KawaiiKaren88 certainly said a mouthful. Had a couple of interesting ideas there, though... Did you get stuck or something? Writer\'s Block? (Been there a couple times, myself.) Well, your story. Whenever...

Wow-za. I LOVE THIS STORY! I love where it goes n\' how it all folded into what it be\' today! XD Ye\' should make Yukito come, one with glasses, as Yue\'s brother n\' just as powerful. He would take a fancy to Touya n\' then we\'d have a love triangle! (hopeless romantic here) Or if ye\' don\'t wanna Yukito, just make Touya do something that\'ll hose the lil\' sex-crazed Yue down. I don\'t think Yue\'s gone into Touya with his... yet.Also, start putting Syaoran in more. Ye\' made \'im as cold as cold can get. XD Maybe make Sakura do more o\' the animal thing. ;_; I don\'t like that Relan...guy munchkin. I love this story! ;_; I hope Chapter 12 comes out! Please! ;_; (loves) Hmm...

I wonder, are ye\' gonna put Kero in somehow? XD He could save the day! :3 I dunno, Eriol wouldn\'t fit into this whole story. @_@ Hmm, maybe Nakuru could try stealing Touya too. XD Squee! Men in this story be\' sho...evil! T~T (goes insane) I loved it though. TuT MORE MORE MORE! Please?! ;_; I have no life... I wish Sakura n\' Touya had magic too. @_@ They could defend \'emselves though there would be no more Yue/Touya! Nay! Eee, what to do, what to do?

Hmm (thinks of entrance fir\' Syaoran after much delay):
He could be thinking in his room over the auction. I really wanted to see what his thoughts were about during that time, up until today. I wanna see what he\'s doin\' now. I keep thinking about a yellow canary flying to Sakura\'s index finger while she\'s in that cage and then puttering away in its freedom ironically. Hmm, Kero really should come. ;_; Or maybe he could be Syaoran\'s attendant and they always bicker with each other. He would be a lil\' mouse, a lion or a human with lion features. XD Then Kero could secretly befriend Sakura and sometimes take her out to the woods, but then returning her like the magic munchkin he be\'. Then one day, Syaoran could follow them and eavesdrop on Sakura, who could be talking sentimental with Kero. Yeah, :O Sakura REALLY needs a friend right now. And she needs a place and time to go to the bathroom, damnit! >:O

Well, thats if ye\' don\'t have an ideas. XD This sucks, I really wanna see what happens! ;_; (impatiently screeches like a siren and everybody combusts into flames) I\'m so happy that ye\' didn\'t make anything happen between Touya and Kaho. SO happy. @_@ I\'d be damned if that were in \'ere like that. Touya strikes me more as a seme though. XD Seme trying to break another seme, awesome. Maybe Yue should get mad and perform a temporary sex-filled brainwash on Touya. XD

(wants to see her Syaoran/Sakura) :O I\'m insane. I\'m a sucker fir\' that couple, always have been, always will be. XD This fanfic\'s really fir\' open-minded girls, I swear. :O I didn\'t mind the Tomoyo/Sakura but I knew it wouldn\'t last fir\' long. Tomoyo seems to be too \"one-night-stand\" with every girl there. I just don\'t see the justification o\' the slavery. ;_; Why\'d Sakura hafta be so dumb that day?! Damnit! Oh wells. XD Touya\'s so spiffy. I don\'t think MY brother would do that fir\' me and I don\'t think I would be that innocent...or maybe I would.

Meiling should put up in there. As a pleasure slave or as a regular member of the...castle. o,o;; Where\'s Syaoran\'s parents and sisters?! @_@ Were they ALL sold as slaves? ;o; Meiling could still be considered Syaoran\'s fiancee I guess. It\'s always spiffy to see him a prick with a crazy girlfriend (eh, Meiling\'s spiffy, I haven\'t a problem with her but it\'s nice to dump her on Syaoran just for him to go with Sakura) and then turn into a marshmellow that blushes every 2.5 seconds. It\'s amusing. XD Wee. :3 Actually, I\'m happy that hasn\'t happened yet. XD Geewilickers, when\'s Yue gonna soften up? ;_; Ralen should die! T_T DIE DIE DIE!

(has no life, still reviewing)

I\'ll probably break the limit. o,o;; Anyways...Ever thought o\' making any cards appear? ...Eh, nevermind, that\'d ruin everything. :O Suppi! :3 Zuzuzu! Maybe the Faith...er HOPE, stupid me. @_@ Erm, that\'s all...fir\' NOW! I\'ll review again if I have anymore ideas! :D I have no life, forgive me! XD

First off, I must say that I hardly ever review fics, but that I felt inclined to do so after reading this. On communal fiction sites, the ratio of Good to bad stories tends to be heavily weighted on the bad side, and it\'s refreshing to know that there\'s some hope for fanfiction, through stories like yours. It\'s been a while since I\'ve genuinely enjoyed and looked foreward to reading a fic. You have a great knack for characterization and description, and Yue is wonderfully vindictive (though deep down I hope that maybe he\'ll turn out to be good ^_^). You paint a very pretty picture.

As much as I\'m liking this story, I\'m starting to get a little bit bored with Sakura\'s side. Maybe Ralen\'s comment wasn\'t too far off; the only thing resembling romance right now is her brother, which probably isn\'t your intention but nonetheless is getting out of hand.
Really hoping Syaoran comes along. Someone needs to turn that collar black so that the shit can really hit the fan.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! this is wonderful!!!!!!!! it\'s the best fic i\'d ever read!!!! I love it , I LOVE YOU!! FOR MAKING THIS EXCELENT STORY!! please PLEASE!! DON\'T STOP AND UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN ^_^

hey!!
nice story... but next chappie better b called something like \"Touya kicks ass\" or \"Yue\'s nice side \" or \"Free\" or anything along those lines... the last chapter was rather depressing... poor ppl.. they need some niceness it cant all b that cruel... plus touya cant keep tricking sakura and crap.... hehe

Touya and Ua I love it!!!
Ive been waiting forever plz update.
I don\'t think ive ever seen any other
Touya and Ua fics... maybe cause I don\'t read this stuff much
plz keep them together.
Will he always hate him?
Will they fall in love!?
I don\'t know you must update!!!

Opps! I spelled yue wrong!!

Wicked awesome story. Please continue. Do Li and Sakura get paired up in this one, too?

This story is good, though I find the slave thing a little insulting. Hope they get out of there. Hope Sakura gets with Li.