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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person Anon-chan
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:D But I'm GLAD it's not just a one-shot. You wouldn't believe how often I checked to see when this was updated. You have SUSPENSE, woman. No changey your style now. I won't let you!
person Toraphim
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
8 chapters well worth their weight. *_* Tiny part of me hopedethiething would come of Yue presenting himself to Touya, but the realistic part was saying, 'nah, don't get your hopes up'.

...I like it when that part get's a triumphant finger to the fac_^ *_^ *waves a flag* Here's to more cheering your ficcu on.
person Scorpinac
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No, good muse! Very, very good muse! Is *very*, very good and interesting story! Though, as previously stated, I could do without the Yaoi bits, but at least it hasn't gotten terribly explicit yet. Now, ho Sak Sakura gonna loose her innocence anyway, hmm? I have a couple of thoughts on what could be coming, but I'll wait patiently for the ninth chapter(it can't be *that* far away). I also eagerly await the entry of Meilin, who you did promise was going to eventually turn up. Ja'ne!
person Rosiesan
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! No!!! You have to continue!!! You have to! I've been waiting ages for this chapter and noa I don't know if I'll be able to manage waiting for the next one! I'll probably go mad before it comes out...

Seriously, amazing story. I've been following it for a while and I love the originality of the idea and just basically Yue/Touya always gets me drooling.

::DROOL::

See?

~Rosie
person lili
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grins like a maniac*

I checked everyday for the update to this story; I thought at one point that since the cover site was down, some people had thought that the main site was down too. I almost gave up. I came up here at the bottom of the 12th inning of the playoffs tonight and immediately converted from baseball fan to giddy fangirl.

Anyway... UPDATE SOON!

-lili

By the way, is this archived anywhere else? ^_^
person allovernow
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy the story. You're doing a great job of conveying emotion: Touya's frustration and loss and Sakura's fear and innocence in a natural way. I think your descriptions are great, and I am anxiously awaiting the first viewing of Lord Yue. Mmm. Yue. Also, do you have anymore fiction, or a personal site?

Thanks for sharing!
person Scorpinac
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Nothing can stop us nowe!" They always say that before it all goes to hell... After all, we haven't had any M/F sex yet, or Yaoi(there have been previous comments, including your own, to that effet, though I hope the Yaoi is kept down to a "dull roar", if you know what I mean[if it doesn't have a hot babe involved, anime or otherwise, I'm not interested.]), and, most important of all, we haven't met Meilin yet! And you did say she was going to pop up. Well, eagerly awaiting the eighth chap.! See ya!
person Shantelle
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was another superb chapter, this story is just so amazing. Please keep up the good work! look foward to your other chapters! Bye! =^.^=
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is really good and i'm enjoying reading it. i like the story line it's going along and can't wait for more.
person lili
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*giddiness*

That was a long chapter. Adored it.

I checked every day for updates. One week = torture.

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