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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person phay
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it!
person somnam
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Best line of the chapter:

"That his own sister was trapped in one was nothing short of bizarre, and briefly he wondered about the tastes of this Yue."

You have such a way with sardonic comedic relief, I tell you. Anyway, I was hoping or guessing from the title that this would be where Touya finally found her. So yay; I'm happy. Now all that's left is for Yue to snatch him away in yaoi splashes, bwahahaha.

By the way, this whole story reminds me of that oneshot you did for.. the shrine, was it? Ack, I can't remember the title. It did take place in a small villiage though. The last line was "I'll take them both."

To reiterate: yay! an update.
person azn_kitties
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aawwww!! Can u please update soon?? I'd really like to read the rest of 'Pleasure Slave'!! It sounds very interesting but I'm quite sad that Li isn't Sakura's owner! All well I'll just let you write the story. Good story except kind of weird for the Tomoyo and Sakura *ahem* parts.
person heyy13
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here are some inspiring words i found under top top ten (10) most motivating things to say to a writer. ^.^

Write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write write ...

i think thats enought. ^.^ i hope your motivated. lol. The story is realy good and has a amazing amount of plot for thirt ort of thing. So id realy enjoy it if you did as it says above, and write.

P.S. Oooooo.... Yaoi is good. ^.^ So i yuri tho. But i dont mind. I want to see the pairings. *pouts* Hope this review was helpfull, and hope you coninue the story. Me.
person anonymous
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more!!
person Lu-chan
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the story. Please Update , ve, very impatient. ^_^;
person lili
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger. No...

This story has gotten me thinking, though. I feel like Yukito is going to be added to the story but I don't know where, and it's driving me cratzie.

But I just came back from a shopping excursion and then had a bruschetta splurging experience, so this story pretty much boosted today's fun scale to euphoric. :D

Please continue soon! ^___^

person Angel of Death
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Really well done. And Yue's gonna be in it! Yay, gotta love hunky Yue ^.^ Is this gonna be a Sakura/Li or a Sakura/Yue? I mean in the end that is, cause i'm sure Sakura will be taken advantage of by pratically every male character in the story lol
person Yen_Lily
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shantelle
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please do not abandon this story I like it very much. It's very original and I can't wait to read more. Hope this incourages you a little i'm not very good with reviews. I bow down to the fantastic writer that you are...Master(lol!) Aurevoir!

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