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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! That was sooooo good. I'm really happy that noting hapened to Li. I hope that Toya gets whats coming to him. Poor Yue. I love that he matured more than Toya at the end. Cannot wait for the next chapture.
There was nothing that I thought needed improvemnt or expanding. I really think that Yue watching sakura and Li worked out nice and with the tie in at the end. CIAO!
There was nothing that I thought needed improvemnt or expanding. I really think that Yue watching sakura and Li worked out nice and with the tie in at the end. CIAO!
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This made me cry, like a true heartfelt cry. That was just so painful! This is by far one of the most beautifully written fanfics I have EVER read. Well done.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
TOUYA!!!! that git that idiot that moronic stupid head!!!!! gha!!!!!.... don't worry capitalist.... ur still dearly loved.... I'm just too pissed off over that mule headed touya to be pissed over any one else.... HOW THE HELL COULD HE DO THAT!!?? poor sakura... poor li.... but those two get a huge shout out for talkin some long needed sense into those two... U GO KIDS!!!!! they did not deserve this...
that evil touya was really repulsive.... gave me the chills...i'm glad that Yue came to his senses, it was really touchin.... n i nearly cried when Li n Sak have to seperate!!
i hope kero flies in chomps touya's head off..... n someone call an ambulance for Yue!!!!!
this is the 1st Sak Li pic i guess..... i just had to draw it!!!
http://chasva.deviantart.com/art/why-66878726
plz upade soon... plz plz plz!!!!!!! the tension is killin!!!
that evil touya was really repulsive.... gave me the chills...i'm glad that Yue came to his senses, it was really touchin.... n i nearly cried when Li n Sak have to seperate!!
i hope kero flies in chomps touya's head off..... n someone call an ambulance for Yue!!!!!
this is the 1st Sak Li pic i guess..... i just had to draw it!!!
http://chasva.deviantart.com/art/why-66878726
plz upade soon... plz plz plz!!!!!!! the tension is killin!!!
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O OH MY GOD! CONTINUE!!!! I have to see if anything more happens between them?
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw man, its so good that I wish there was more...and I hadn't read this updated chapter-at least I won't have to suffer another months wait for a update...ugh...neways, great job!
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hate You!! Are you kidding me?! Never in my life have cried at a movie or reading or reading a work of literature until now. I mean damn my house is basically like that I had to fight to continue seeing my boyfriend and my family still refuses to see how in love we are. I mean it hit really close to home and it was good. Plus, Touya will be back he can't resist Yue. >D
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm without words, again. the whole 'if you love something let it go' is usually a platitude, but it's do very true with these pairings.I'm glad that yue finally realized that, but i can't help feeling sorry not for him (though that's there a little too) but for sakura, who did nothing but be herself, and still loses everything because of other people's issues. 'love' should not equal 'control'.
gorgeous story, i think i'll be sad when it's finally over, because that'll mean i won't get to read more of your wonderful writing.
gorgeous story, i think i'll be sad when it's finally over, because that'll mean i won't get to read more of your wonderful writing.
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god,
This story is getting greater and greater from chapter to chapter.
And it's each time worse to wait.
It's strange. Nothing about Yue's first murder.
Greatings
Juy Juka
This story is getting greater and greater from chapter to chapter.
And it's each time worse to wait.
It's strange. Nothing about Yue's first murder.
Greatings
Juy Juka
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god.
I've been following this story for quite a while now, and, lurker that I can be, have never reviewed before. I suck, I know.
But now I can pour out my love for this story all at once, gushing over all the things that are so amazing about it. Or just gushing over how it's amazing in general. Because it is, oh, it *so* is. I feel so inarticulate just repeating that, but I don't know what to say. You really have a talent for getting across exactly what you want.
The emotions in this are so intense, sometimes, it's left me sitting there, shocked in the aftermath, overwhelmed. The characters practically come alive - when Yue hurts, I swear I can feel a phantom ache in my chest. When Touya does something so incredibly stupid but entirely him, I want to smack my head against the wall, even though I know he would do the same thing in an instant. When Ralen so much as breathes, it's like he's breathing down your neck, and you can't help but want to wash that feeling away. (The characterization of your OC's is great, too - Ralen, for example, is undeniably cruel, but he has a realistic side to him. You can believe that he's a real person, even if you don't have any pity on him. ^^) The imagery you weave so well is so powerful, and the reactions it garners from everyone who follows along is well-deserved.
And this chapter - guh. So much intensity. And why can't things just work out for them? It's so frustrating but so good - I know that when things do eventually work out in the end, however far off that may be, it'll be so much more amazing. But for now... poor Sakura, hating her brother. And poor Touya, about to realise what he's done and bear the full brunt of his sister's hate. And, oh, Yue! In the last few chapters, it seems as though he's grown so much (and he certainly isn't the selfish child he once was). And of course it couldn't be all "Toya, you're free," and "Oh, Yue, I love you and I'm staying anyway," and kissing and making up. What's happened between them in the past hasn't just gone away, and you've made a point of making this clear. Touya still bears scars (both emotionally and physically) from his time as Yue's slave. What they've been through together, and really, what they've put each other through, doesn't constitute a happily-ever-after. Not right away, anyway. And I'm glad you didn't do that. Because, really, those two have some serious issues they need to work out before things can ever be okay between them. Touya needs to do the bit of growing up that Yue's done before anything can really work itself out. (And I've gotta say, having the "children" understand all too well what Touya and Yue didn't, and rubbing it in their faces - awesome. XD)
I think I'll cut my already trailing review off here. I, along with everyone else, will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :)
(I also have to admire your dedication for sticking with this so long. Because, well, wow. ^^)
I've been following this story for quite a while now, and, lurker that I can be, have never reviewed before. I suck, I know.
But now I can pour out my love for this story all at once, gushing over all the things that are so amazing about it. Or just gushing over how it's amazing in general. Because it is, oh, it *so* is. I feel so inarticulate just repeating that, but I don't know what to say. You really have a talent for getting across exactly what you want.
The emotions in this are so intense, sometimes, it's left me sitting there, shocked in the aftermath, overwhelmed. The characters practically come alive - when Yue hurts, I swear I can feel a phantom ache in my chest. When Touya does something so incredibly stupid but entirely him, I want to smack my head against the wall, even though I know he would do the same thing in an instant. When Ralen so much as breathes, it's like he's breathing down your neck, and you can't help but want to wash that feeling away. (The characterization of your OC's is great, too - Ralen, for example, is undeniably cruel, but he has a realistic side to him. You can believe that he's a real person, even if you don't have any pity on him. ^^) The imagery you weave so well is so powerful, and the reactions it garners from everyone who follows along is well-deserved.
And this chapter - guh. So much intensity. And why can't things just work out for them? It's so frustrating but so good - I know that when things do eventually work out in the end, however far off that may be, it'll be so much more amazing. But for now... poor Sakura, hating her brother. And poor Touya, about to realise what he's done and bear the full brunt of his sister's hate. And, oh, Yue! In the last few chapters, it seems as though he's grown so much (and he certainly isn't the selfish child he once was). And of course it couldn't be all "Toya, you're free," and "Oh, Yue, I love you and I'm staying anyway," and kissing and making up. What's happened between them in the past hasn't just gone away, and you've made a point of making this clear. Touya still bears scars (both emotionally and physically) from his time as Yue's slave. What they've been through together, and really, what they've put each other through, doesn't constitute a happily-ever-after. Not right away, anyway. And I'm glad you didn't do that. Because, really, those two have some serious issues they need to work out before things can ever be okay between them. Touya needs to do the bit of growing up that Yue's done before anything can really work itself out. (And I've gotta say, having the "children" understand all too well what Touya and Yue didn't, and rubbing it in their faces - awesome. XD)
I think I'll cut my already trailing review off here. I, along with everyone else, will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :)
(I also have to admire your dedication for sticking with this so long. Because, well, wow. ^^)
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, you're so HORRIBLE!!!! lol, well, maybe not. UUgh, this update made my whole day, then crushed it like a tin can, all in one, you sly dog! Anyway, thank you SO much for updating, please Please write more soon...