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Oh, I do hate you, but it's a sort of love-hate thing that's powerful and addicting and I KEEP COMING FOR MORE. This chapter totally blew me away. I love the way you expressed Syaoran and Sakura's relationship and their heartbreaking separation, and Yue understanding their love, and Touya... oh, I /really/ despise him right now. His sister complex has gotten too out of hand. Poor Sakura... and poor YUE. He left him in a second! >:0 Will Sakura slap some sense into him the next chapter, I wonder? 0:)

this, is by far, the most dramatic chapter I've ever read.

I never stopped crying while reading the entire thing

you really are good at this!

keep it up!




P.S.

I'm willing to wait even for another month for the next update.
Just make sure that it will be as good as this, if possible, even better. :)

Oh my...that chapter was...wow...I seriously have no words...XD
For one, it was completely balanced, enough SxS and YxT to go around. And the characters were simply perfect!
I really want Sakura crush his pride to the ground and stomp on it for a while, but people, Touya has being acting like Yue for thw entire story! You cannot hate him now for something he's been doing since the beginning!! He just wasn't doing it conciously, while Yue was. Maybe, just maybe I've just been reading too much of your stories, girl!
I love Touya, and I love what is comming for him, Sakura really will take it out on him.
Which brings me to my next point: Touya hasnt left yet, only because he didnt answer, it doesnt mean his already made his choice. Of course, he will leave, but maybe, just maybe he'll admit it to himself before leaving (he wouldnt admit it to Yue, if he were to leave).
Yue, I love your devious "little mynx" and your reaction to him. Yes, you knew he was playing you afterwards, but you won't deny that the little act didnt get you horny! I mean, kinky evil Touya, anyone???? Way better than kinky non-devious Touya. I thank you for that scene, the deviousness of it was just what I needed, maybe we'll see more of him in the future.
I bet Kero will be back soon, I think the 3 days are almost over. I can't wait to see what he'll do to Touya!!

Thanks again for the amazing chapter, Capitalist. This story has got to be the best AU I've ever read!!

Noooooooooooo! DX
*cries*

This chapter and the last really brought me to tears. Heart renching presure to hard to bear. *sigh*

But I know your a good author and that there will be a very happy ending. In the next chapter I know I'd love to see Sakura smack her brother around good... grrrr... *very upset with her brother right now* Not lieing there. ^^ But your so very good at bringing out emotion while reading. Thankyou for taking your time and posting when you can. I look forwasrd to your next upcoming chapters. THANK YOU!!!

Hate you?

Why in heavens name would i do that... I savor ever moment of emotional torment you ride these fragile hearts though. You do it so professionally it sparkles like a gem. Love, hate, selfish desire, and selflessness all in one bundle going up and down bitter hills and beautiful valleys.

Really I'm not really one for most Yoai stories... but you're fic transcends any such labeling and just shines brilliance in plot, characterization and straight out storytelling.

Happy ending or no i will treasure having read this story and be rather saddened when it ends.


(P.s, I've been reading this since it first came out, and kept on following it up till now. Keep up the excellence)

-Himitsu The Hunter

You are wonderful, I had a hard time keeping back the tears during the Sakura and Syaoran moment. I've said earlier in comments that I wasn't looking forward to this, that I only really cared about Touya and Yue. In the end I've become more concerned about Sakura and Syaoran because they are more deserving to love. Thankfully out of the two at least Yue realized this.

It was awful hearing Touya contradict his own 'hatred' for Yue with controlling his sister.
Touya sounded just as heartless and cruel as Yue had, and it almost seemed out of character. It just shows under the right influences a demon can come from anyone.

I feel more at closure with this chapter, and I feel like this story is coming to a closure soon, and I hope it doesn't. I don't want it to be a miserable ending.

However, Yue did say they both were free. I'm sure Touya is running to tell Sakura and she'll more then happily to tell him to kiss her ass and go find Syaoran.

*Hopes* D:

Everytime I read this story, I swear I go to hell and heaven at the same time. I don't hate you because you take the time to write this amazing story and write it well, though I am not exactly appreciative of this last cliffhanger. Everything you tied together in this last chapter was utterly brilliant. A real big step forward for Yue and a no step anywhere for Touya. Someone needs to burst his bubble and I get the feeling that Sakura will be more than delighted to do so next chapter. I cried and my heart broke at least 3 times. So I shall hold you responsible for mending it soon (reallyyy reallyyy soon if at all possible) for only you can put the pieces back together.

Wow! I didn't think Yue would release him right away! But the goodbye scene was heartbreaking, beautifully done. Can't wait to read more!

ow my goodie god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
how could u end it dere!!!!
pls u must update soon
pls!!!!!!!!!!

Now i dont hate you. for you didnt kill Li. but it is gay you let him go and kept Sakura. but you know how to fix that, so i'll wait for the next chap. loved this one btw