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I cried. And I never cry. Good job.

Syaoran and Sakura's goodbye brought tears to my eyes.

wow! i cant believe it, how u manage to link every small detail from beginnin to tne end without any gap n the dialogues n lines in this chap was really outstandin, the Yue n Touya's mirror image character n how u portraied that was really marvellous~ Yue confessed! Noooo.... n touya is leaving, hope he realises his feelings soon too~ cant believe Li was banished n poor Sakura, will be waitin for ur nex update! thanks for this chapter!

o....mg
omg omg
...om...g

I can sense the story is coming to a close...
PLEASE dont end it with Touya and sakura in their forest
..and all that.
that CANT be the end
they both gotta confess their love for each other

Woot!! You updated. ^_^ And perfect timing too...on a day when I actually don't have assloads of homework to do. Rock on!!

Fantastic chapter. Poor Yue. So many changing emotions. If I were in his position I think I'd be throwing up like Touya. But yeah, I didn't think you could make a worse cliffhanger than the last chapter, but you're close with this one. Woot! Update when you can. (in other words...PLEASE update soon ^__^)

omg omg omg why did syaoran have to leave???? is there a happy ending though??

I'm totally hating you right now for the cliffhanger but pllleeeeaaaaassssseeee!!!!!!!!!!!! keep writing!!!!!!!! post ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thousands of people are "dying"!!!!!!!!!

wow. this story is awesome. i love your writing. please keep going!

This chapter was so moving. The part where Sakura and Syaoran are speaking to each other is amazing; I was definitely crying. I also really liked the last part, when Yue finally releases Touya. The way he acted somehow felt really clean. Before, with the pressure of the Void threatening to kill Touya and all the deceit and Touya's own wild possessiveness over Sakura, everything felt kind of dirty and confusing and chaotic. (What a fat run-on sentence that was)

I also really liked how you paralleled Yue and Touya's relationship to Touya and Sakura's relationship. Sakura's reaction towards her brother was also very disillusioning and was a long time coming, I think. The emotions in this chapter really got to me. Definitely my favorite, favorite, favorite chapter in the whole entire story. It was so good. It was really good. I'm being redundant but I really really mean it.

...although yeah I kinda hate you for that cliffhanger!!!! Hope the next chapter comes out soon!